 Misty Maxwell 2008-10-09 . chapter 4This is really a very good story. I feel so bad for poor Steve.
Please continue. :D
...please? |
 8DDDDDD 2008-02-01 . chapter 3 I like it |
 Black Light Princess 2008-01-12 . chapter 3Phew, finally caught up. Now let's see...
Hannah. That girl's gonna frustrate me greatly in the story's future I'm sure. x_x But 'ey, as long as the characters make the reader feel anything, good stuff is going on.
Steve. Dammit Steve you'd better defend yerself. Dx
Tense moments building up huh? Nice going, cya next chap. |
 Claire Burnside267 2008-01-07 . chapter 3Nice chapter :) Please, continue :) |
 Cornebus 2008-01-04 . chapter 3And another nice chapter!! Keep them up!
I picture the story as a manga too ^^ |
 wulfgarfang 2008-01-04 . chapter 3had to make some time to read this enchanting chapter. the thought of steve reverting back to a human is kinda exciting, i have my own ideas with stevie boy but none quite as advanced as these, so kudos to you for that. i'll be anxiously awaiting another splendid update to which i hope to see a little bit of the redfield siblings? neway, nicely done. -- wfang |
 Black Light Princess 2007-12-28 . chapter 2Again a good chap, but I'm curious about a couple of things. Guess I'll have to see in later chaps. ^^ But still, if I can know now, why is Iria so nice and kinda fond-ish with Steve? Surely she can't be that way with every BOW... there'd be no progress in bio weaponry if the head scientist wanted to work only for the sake of the specimens as people. XD
And also, what's the meaning of N-Thanatos? If it comes from something. I'm curious. >_>
Other than that, Steve's progress is intriguing. I wonder what he'll do next, hmm...
Ah, and to make the review worthwile, a bit of a suggestion: maybe include in the summaru that this contains your take on what happened to Steve after CV. If I'd known so, it would've catched my attention way before, so maybe it'll attract more people and fans of Steve.
Don't be discouraged though, you're doing wonderful in this. ^^ |
 Black Light Princess 2007-12-28 . chapter 1Interesting, interesting! :3 I thought it'd just an OC as specimen, but if you say it's guessable, then I'm betting on Steve.
At first I was wondering "so Wesker's still with Umbrella? Another double-crossing?", it was bugging me and messing up timelines in my head. x_x So it's good you kept it canon.
No mary-sue descriptions, very realist on what a less cold-hearted scientist would think of a new human specimen. Quite the way to catch the reader with the first chap. :P Well done! |
 wulfgarfang 2007-12-25 . chapter 2'nother awesome chapter here. i like your take on these characters, hope to see some more redfield sibling interaction :) still a very promising story you got goin' here and you updated rather quickly, that's another plus! can't wait for more -- wfang |
 Claire Burnside267 2007-12-24 . chapter 2Nice chapter :) Hope to read more about the Redfields doing too :) |
 Cornebus 2007-12-23 . chapter 2I don't know what to say...I am getting more and more interested in the story ^^ It's just plainly awesome. I really want to see the next chapter!! |
 Cornebus 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Even if I am not familiar with some words(like the t-virus and B.O.W), I really like the prologue. You are really good at writing (at least, a lot better than me!). I want to read the rest of the story (It's sad I won't be able to go to internet for a whole week...)!! I really want to see when the action will start ^^
Ps: thanks for the dedication ^^ |
 Claire Burnside267 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Interesting. I like where it is going. Please continue :) |
 wulfgarfang 2007-12-19 . chapter 1hey, romance is great, even a smidgen of it, but if it isn't your style, than don't fret about it (of course the pairing of claire and leon is just the clear way to go lol) really, on a serious note, this is a pretty good intro. your writing is easy to follow, with great descriptions, and the overall setting and feel of it is done quite well - no spelling errors either so you already earned yourself some brownie points in my book. and yeah, i think i have a pretty darn good idea as to who the 'stev... i mean specimen' is, but your take on it is already different than many others i've read about said specimen. so welcome to the re section and please don't keep us waiting too long for the next chapter. -- wfang |