i loved it...

great job

haha you know it remind me some what of whats happening only the girl i like knows i like her and she has a bf and he knows i like her and she flirts with me just because of and the her bf goes along with it!! it so ...cruel T.T anyhow nice story XD made me happy wot!!

Are you kidding? you have lots of talent! you are awesome!
I liked it a lot! ^^

-Hikari Hina

Very cute. I liked it alot. Romantic, tension and then the declaration. Very well done.

Really cute story. Good job. =)

Aww this was so cute. I liked it, It was good read.

Very nice I liked the tension you had at the end. Although I had a feeling he was talking about Ino, I could feel the tension in Ino. It was also written very well.

-Keep up the good work!

-KatanaUser

I liked it.

It wasn't earth-shattering though. I think the problem (to me) was that it was so quick. If you just built it up more. Type it up. (If that makes sense) I mean, like show us what happened on the days leading up to it, put different perspectives on what happened. Like what Naruto and Ino were thinking, you know stuff like that. I don't know how else to say it. Ino just says that she loves him, but we don't know why. Put that kind of stuff in there, I think would make it better. It would be longer, but meh, you gotta work hard for greatness. (cheesy) So yeah, good job, but you can make it alot better.

What!? A hint of Sasu/Hina in a Naru/Ino fic?

I like it alot. :D My two most favorite pairings. xD

Very nice story, you know what I'm also starting to get really addicted to this pairing!

YAY! Naruto/Ino is the best pairing EVER!

for someone who mostly writes sasuke/hinata you write Naruto/Ino very well.

keep up the good work and i hope to see more naruto/ino fic from you soon ^_^