So far so good. Please update soon.

This is quite good - for a moment I thought it would be a Sue, but it's not. I can see you have worked ** this, but it still needs that extra bit of polish to make it shine. I have links to helpful forums on my profile, where you can find a beta to read your story and pick up on your errors. There aren't that many, so don't worry too much about them.

The idea of a kid who wants to sleep for weeks at a time to get away from the teasing of the other kids is intriguing, but your logic is a bit off - surely someone would notice if a child disappeared for a week! The lady needs to be identified as well. Could we have some more detail on her, please?

Finally, Elves come to maturity at around fifty years of age, though some of them take longer. If Legolas is older than fifty, he's a young adult.

I hope you don't take offence at my effort to be helpful here, I would definitely like to see more of your work. Happy writing!