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B.A.Doyle
2008-11-01 . chapter 4
Emmy!

Write more right now!

B.A.Doyle (you know who I am)
Bridget
2008-10-15 . chapter 3
It would be awsome if you had jack in one of the chaptors, evenchaly. Either as the face of Boe or Jack befor he becomes a bloated head.

Your wifey,
Bridget (Willow and Tara are gay 4 each other? I need to watch Buffy, I've only seen angel. Oh! Conner and Cordy 2gether r so cute! Even cuter then Angel and Cordy!)
B.A.Doyle
2008-10-10 . chapter 1
I realy like this, and harry potter isn't even one of my top favs any more. Is the docter David Tennet or one of the older docters? curse this "o" botten, it's sticking (ignor this rage). Is Nickie suppsed to be Pastsy's daughter or is she just a peep? You should have Dudly have a wizard as a son/daughter and describe his reaction. *Laughs* By's
BD
2008-10-10 . chapter 4
Well that was interesting...
Rain the Revenant
2008-02-12 . chapter 3
Interesting. A likable original character, realistic student reactions to things, and you've cleverly set it in the next generation with the addition of Scorpio - no mucking around replacing defense teachers or having your main character get distracted by plots we already know the endings to. I just hope you aren't going to go the cliched countercultural way and make all the Gryffindors stupid and unlikeable.

Ah! And great voice, for Ten - you've got him quite in character. Liked the sly Barty Crouch reference, too. And Rose - would that be Ron and Hermione's daughter? Is that the sonic screwdriver she's got? Wonder where she picked up that? ;)

So, in conclusion, I eagerly await the continuation of this tale. Au revior.
gwyneff
2008-01-08 . chapter 3
So far so good. Please continue!
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