 Arin 2009-09-28 . chapter 1 LOL, that's a great one. Really. Awesome. xD
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 Dark-Hooded Eriol the Magician 2008-09-23 . chapter 1This was a wonderful story. I love the SyaoranxSakura angle! It's so plausbile. By the way, I love the news article spoof. It's so cute! |
 CalebKing 2007-12-25 . chapter 1I know you've said you won't continue this, but I have to praise you for giving them such perfect roles. Their characters are so spot on and so believable in this universe I just want to give you a big piece of pie.
Syaoran's blush was perhaps my favorite part, next to the "Kuro-G." |
 Skies 2007-12-24 . chapter 1 Yes, I had to read this one, too. ^^
And very cute! I know that this story is only intended as a one-shot, but I will say (with confidence) that it has the potential to be something HUGE.
If you ever consider to continue working on this particular story again, I promise to be one of your first reviewers. :) |
 Halfmoon 2007-12-23 . chapter 1 This is HILARIOUS! Hilarious, thoughtful, and in character! I adore your take on Syaoran, and Sakura is just as sweet as ever. Kuro is stubborn and protective, and Fay is just...perfect. I really, really hope you continue; this creative idea mixed with the brilliance of your writing would make for one great story. :D |
 Kinoshita Kristanite 2007-12-23 . chapter 1Exceelent... |
 Ceirwy 2007-12-23 . chapter 1Interesting! The first bit had in cackling in glee over your choice of characters bu as it went along my grin seemed to spread. I am intrigued. |
 parma-violets 2007-12-20 . chapter 1Loving this! It's certainly an original idea - I love how you've kept everyone so brilliantly in character (loved the helplessly devoted Syaoran and Director!Fye - "Kuro-G" was right on the mark!), and you write very well too! Hope you continue!
parma-violets x |
 Azamiko 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Ah, so much fun!! Adoring Syaoran, conniving Fai, overprotective Kurogane, and innocent Sakura! Hey, that actually sounds like the manga! ;b I like this idea! No chance of doing anything else with it? Like the premier? Where Fai tries to con Kurogane into going as his date? And Kurogane tries to spy on Sakura and Syaoran on their date? |
 Withdrawn 2007-12-19 . chapter 1YES! Tsubasa comedic fluff! This has totally made my day! I mean, sheesh, a wonderful writer lending their talent to my favorite series of all time, that's just plain awesome, especially considering that the way you introduced this suggests (or my fanboyishness has taken hold and made me interpret this) that this is going to end up as a series of one-shots. That would be wonderful. I've gotta say, I love how you characterize the characters. I mean, your description of Syaoran's reaction to the discovery that Sakura was going to be working on something, and the way that she basically had him eating out of the palm of her hand and didn't even know it seconds after they met...! Beyond that, who does not absolutely love Fai's never ending teasing of Kurogane? It's just so perfect! |
 Moro-moro 2007-12-19 . chapter 1Oemge... This is good! You should actually continue it, 'cause it'd be fantabulously funny. I kinda want to know what the movie's about... :scratches head:
Anyway! Yeah, it was good: It makes me laugh. Yay! ^^ |
 WildfireDreams 2007-12-19 . chapter 1^_^ That was cute and incredible in character ^_^ |