 just another fma fan. 2008-07-30 . chapter 2 Okay, I've got comments for each story this time. They are so beautiful and sad. I love them all. ^^
1)Meaningless: This sounds like something Winry would be thinking in vol 12 when she finally admitts she loves him. It fits nicely. I'm bad at angst, so I admire your writing.
2)Goodnight: It was short and touching really. And your stories were hilarious. I got my dad hooked on it and we watched the whole thing one a week (I recorded it from Adult Swim. heh heh...) My mom walked in during ep 25 at Hughes' funeral when Elicia was crying about them burying her papa. I think that freaked her out...
3)So Far Away: sounds like an after the movie scene. That's why I like the manga better, there's a CHANCE of them being together at least! If you want a nice alternative to the movie, try Winter in Germany on this sight. It's amazing! And honestly, it makes a lot more sense to me that the real CoS plot. -_-'
4)Summer Haze: I love ghost stories! xD touching and sad. Nice writing.
5)Sunday's Fog: I don't see Winry as the artistic type, but it was a nice touch. Also, I took first year Japanese last year, and I can say that it's not as hard as you might think. I'm glad you had with the translator. By the way, do you know what "Sasuke" means in Japanese? Because I could never figure it out! (Although "Neji" means "screw" *the object...sick minds...*)
6)While I Wait: I think this is my favorite. I have always had a soft spot for poems. *wistful smile* not if only I could write one... Anyway, um... I loved it. ^^;; And the chibi after party was brilliant wasn't it?! Soo cute! And the black hayates attacking was the BEST! xDD
Done now. ^^;; |
 DemonRaily 2008-05-18 . chapter 6Yey, thanks for updating ^_^ |
 Whyle 2008-05-17 . chapter 6Hey ! It's me again ! XD !
I'll never forget a fic that i like ! ;)! (forgive me if my English is bad .. T_T)
So, such a wonderful chapter, I love it ! ;) !
It's very well-written ! Thanks a lot !! ;) !
And, update as soon as you can !! XD !! |
 Whyle 2008-05-17 . chapter 5THAT'S SO CUTE !! XD !! ;) !
But, update quicker please ! XD !
thank you very much ! |
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 Aiiro Hoshi 2008-04-05 . chapter 4So in Summer Haze...is Ed dead?
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But you've got some pretty interesting ideas here for these - although this hasn't been updated for a while, maybe you could post a few more? -grin-
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 S J Smith 2007-12-28 . chapter 4Poor Winry. I'm confused, though; is she having a dream or a hallucination in the very end? I almost wondered if perhaps she died and hadn't realized it until Ed disappeared. |
 Whyle 2007-12-23 . chapter 4TT ... poor Winry, life is not fair !
great chapter ! thanks ! ;) |
 LittleChemist 2007-12-22 . chapter 2I that it was great, but I really liked your comment about your dad, parents are hysterical aren't they? I'm twenty five and my mother thinks I nuts cos, I into FMA so much, but she does like my art... |
 Whyle 2007-12-21 . chapter 3nice chapter ! you're gonna update every day ? cool !
lol !
thank you !! ;) |
 Whyle 2007-12-20 . chapter 2lol ! If he had seen Envy ... XD !
update soon, thanks a lot !! ;)
(nice chapter anyway) |
 AdventureAddict 2007-12-19 . chapter 1-whimpers- Winry, gimme a hug!
It was sweet. Short, but sweet. I liked how it was accurate to Winry's personality. |
 Whyle 2007-12-19 . chapter 1so cute ! ^^
continue like that, I love your fic !!
thanks, and update soon ! |