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| xxguesswhoxx 2008-02-22 ch 1,  | abuselolz her jokes r so funny |
| ld80061 2008-01-27 ch 1, | abuseA very good story, starah! Thank you :) Please write more... |
| Anti-R 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseAhahahah! Totally see this! Sokka's such an oblivious tease. XD |
| SquirrelPie 2007-12-24 ch 1, | abuseAHH! I love it :D it was well-written and an adorable plot. Wonderful! |
| kasplosion 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseHehehe. Right amount of fluff, if you ask me. Nice work. I was lightly spazzing when Sokka was touching Toph's chin, totally expecting the kiss. XD |
| Jezkalynn 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseLoved it! I found this linked from LJ, and I just wanted to say what a wonderful little fic this is, especially for your first try writing Tokka. Poor Toph. One of my favorite aspects of this 'ship is tough-as-nails Toph having unrequited feelings for someone, and you really captured that well here! Please keep it up! I'd love to see more of Toph pining for an oblivious Sokka! |
| Coeus 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery nice. Well-written missing moment fics are always fun to read. Great job. |
| razzledazzle41191 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseReally great story, I loved it! Toph was so IC, she and Sokka need to hook up soon if they're not bringing Suki back. I love the part where Sokka asks if his tongue is purple ;) |
| Cows are my friends 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseGood story. It shows a lot of in character interaction. |
| Nerf-or-Nothing 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAH! OH MY GOSH! That was so CUTE! A lovely take on it! I think Sokka enjoyed that too and considering how obvservant he was he could so tell she was a tad uncomfortable! If he just wanted to make sure her tongue was purple then he could have asked, instead he stroked her jaw with his thumb and even opened her lips with his finger. Yeah... he enjoyed that to much... LOL! YEY! Gah this was so cute, yes Sokka will always have an ally in Toph. This was very well written and wondefully done. Great idea too! Keep making more Toph and Sokka romantic stories or silly stories. They are just so great together even as simple pals! |
| megi52 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseOMG that was great poor toph i would have been to embaressed to speak for like an hour -Megi |
| Lady Sichi 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAahahahahaa...I love it! Poor Toph...she'll get her kiss one day though ;P |
| Solembum13 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseThis was perfect. I really liked it. Write more stuff. :) |
| i-embrace-OCD 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseCute scene. This seems like a possibility - I could see it happening in the show. Nice job! :) |