When I played that level on Bioshock, I always wondered why that Big Daddy attacked you. I always assumed it was because it could somehow tell you were not a real Big Daddy and that you should stay away from the Little Sisters.

But I think I like your explanation better. Well done.

I might be a little late saying this, but:

Great story.

Hope you do another BioShock FanFic sometime. (I already read, loved, and commented on Lure of Death's Call)

I always feel so bad for the Big Daddies...

Great job on this. One of the better Little Sister and Big Daddy fics around here. :)

Aw wtf! i think i'm crying. Thats was pretty depressing. good story though. Crap its hard to type when your all teary eyed.

Cool, this was good.

Hey, I remember playing through the game that a Big Daddy attacks you and your Little Sister in the Proving Grounds. I didn't think much of it at the time, but you did a brilliant job of crossing the stories of this Little Sister, that Big Daddy, and Jack together. I always liked to think that the Little Sister you protect at that part was Masha, but Christina is just as good. Once again, great work!

Very good.

this story is depressing... poor big daddy =(

I like this story, though it made me sad...poor Big Daddy...

Brilliantly characterised, I liked the soulful elements of the Big Daddy's demeanour.
Very well done.

good, a great compliment to the game, if you finished it at least. you got most of the stuff from the game right, which some other authors fail to do.

...graahaahahg.

Very good story, especially being a Bioshock fan. It fits very nicely within the story and really tugs on the heart. I look forward to more works like this, hopefully? Maybe other denizens of Rapture to be explored, possibly?

Interesting concept. I like it.