 Protector of Canon2 12/19/07 . chapter 1I like it, but I have one quibble."Roy sighs whenever he asks it, and Dick immediatley feels bad for bringing up sore memories.
What memories are we talking about, exactly?
Did dick leave Gotham right around the time that Roy had all his issues? Does Dick's question bring back memories of all Roy's problems with Ollie? Was Dick's leaving Gotham particullarly painful to Roy for some reason?
It probably wouldn't hurt to add a sentance explaining what "sore memories" means. |