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| TwilightFanatic01 2008-05-13 ch 4,  | abuseOk, I like this fanfic, i really do, REALLY! but one thing u may want to do, when u are writing from one characters point of view, and then switch to another, you should let the reader know. for example, in chpt. 4 you start off with dot talking about her mixed feelings, then you go to Hopper. Before dot starts off, it may b helpfull to put Dot pov (point of view) before u start, then when you switch to Hopper put Hopper pov. Just and idea, may cause less confusion! Its really good, I like it. |
| TOONSRULE 2008-01-24 ch 10, | abuseI really liked it! I hope you can do another sequel to this! That would be so cool. |
| Imaginary Fiend 2008-01-20 ch 10, | abuseZOMGanotherreviewer? *ahem* Nicely done, I liked this a lot. ABL needs more fanfiction, keep writing! :3 |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-29 ch 10, | abuseIt's over? :( NO! **cries** |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-29 ch 9, | abuseWOW! OMGAH! Lol... And the stick's name is Slim I think... And the praying mantis's name is Manny not Manti... I think. LOL, okay, I'm not really sure I just assumed tey were calling him Manny. xD |
| JamesLuver 2007-12-29 ch 1, | abuseAw, I'm REALLY enjoying this! ^_^ PLEASE! Update son! Can't wait to find out what happens next! ^_^ |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-28 ch 8, | abuseNo wai... =O |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-26 ch 7, | abuseGo Atta Go Atta! Lol |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-25 ch 6, | abuseDang... you're killing me with all the cliffhangers. xD |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-20 ch 5, | abuseO_O |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-20 ch 4, | abuseAw... Poor Dot. =( |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-19 ch 3, | abuse*legasp* OMG! *snigger* A SOMBRERO? Ei, senor! You stole me sombrero! Hopper- O_o Sorry? xD LOL |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-19 ch 2, | abuseDot likes Flik. Lol... |
| NikChik-11 2007-12-19 ch 1, | abuseAW! Mine too! xD LOL! |