i'd be mad too update soon

wells i gots to goes

ja ne

.MEOW!

cts plz cant wait for more update soon

wo who yay! Kagura is dead yay!

kool! nxt cap plz?

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

I like the story very much very interesting.

But just so that you do know. Chapter 4 is the same as Chapter 5 the only difference is Chapter 5 has 2 more lines in it than Chapter 4.

Not ment to be a bother or anything just thought you should know.

Hope you update everything soon can't wait to know what happens next.

i liked it but im so pissed that you put the same stiff from chap 4 into chap 5 but added a little to the end ( please update soon

y did u repeat chapter 4 may i ask and just added in a few sentences at the end?

chappie 4 and 5 are the same. like the idea although everything is very rushed, we dont know anything about how the gang came together and why. everyones past. also think about adding discription it might help make your chappies longer.

just calm the story down and take time for the plot to settle in. because for the moment there are just random events happening and reader cant always understand their reasoning.

but the plot is good. the ideas are fresh. i hope im helping and not being rude.

update soon

chelsea34

good job

ooh its getitng juicy!

keep it up

Why do they think Kags i crazi?

PAMS(please add more soon)

Sounds intresting so far, update soon!