Wow, that was really well done! I loved it. very suspenseful. It took me by surprise that both Tidus and Auron died. Most people leave them alive cause of canon, but it was REALLY nice to see the plot overrode that. Story is sometimes more important then status quo. Anyway. Good job!

I feel like I just read some Edgar Allen Poe or something...he is your inspiration, by chance? O.o That was a twisted story...VERY. OMG...that's horrible, ya know?!

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Loved it, however! Very, highly, disturbing. Just like Poe's masterminded work. Oh yeah. ^.^

Honestly, I think it was a good story. It intrigued me because of how unique it is... Thanks for posting it, and I hope to read lots more of your work!

Wow Izz thats dark, even for you. It reminds me alot of Chuckie movies (knowing you they were your inspiration) still tis an amazing fic.