Your next story definitely seems intriguing. This ending is brilliant, illustrating the ramifications of all that had happened.

~ SD ~

Nice ending, although it would have been nice to have Michael moving on finally, years and years in the future.

~ SD ~

It's a shame that you won't be dealing with Antar in this story, seemingly.

~ SD ~

I fear a twist coming along in the story.

~ SD ~

Great depiction of what really happens when a leader falls.

~ SD ~

Darn it, I was really hoping this character would survive.

~ SD ~

Very emotively written and you expressed their grief well.

~ SD ~

Liz's thoughts and reactions are very human and oh so very irritating but it's brilliant that you're illustrating just how much damage and horror war and battles can do to people.

~ SD ~

I feel like a one-person cheerleading squad for Isabel. She completely has the right idea. And Michael's reason...so mundane and yet so realistic.

Brilliant characterisation and group dynamics shown in this chapter.

~ SD ~

Oh my days; did not see Tess' admission coming. Brilliantly written and straight out of the blue. Your suspense-creating skills are well honed.

~ SD ~

I always thought it was a flip between Maria and Liz. Is it bad of me to say that I'm glad it was the more irritating one?

~ SD ~

Another great chapter and another great way of showing the pain and destruction and falling apart at the seams of all the characters. Brilliantly written.

~ SD ~

This is one of the best chapters in terms of depth of...philosophy, for a lack of a better term. The application of baby steps to the two different scenarios was great.

~ SD ~

About time Isabel took some decisive action. And it's brilliant to read Kate's and Charlie's reactions and Nick's...sort of delayed reaction to everything. Absolutely brilliant.

~ SD ~

Well, so much for a happy reunion. It's annoyingly realistic that they aren't giving Tess an inch on this at all. It's a shame.

~ SD ~