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| Megan Consoer 2008-07-20 ch 12,  | abuseI really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? |
| Godschildtweety 2008-05-15 ch 11, | abusei just finished reading it it was alsome one of my faverotie stoiers ever |
| Stewie Griffin 2008-05-01 ch 1, anon. | abuseI'm starting to thing lots of people on here hate fathers and love mothers.There's only ONE abusive mother fic,and TONS of abusive father fics. It really makes me sick and disgusted think people would hate fathers so much... |
| TheBrokenHeart 2008-03-25 ch 3, | abusethat was...an interesting chapter. lol. i love how she kind of just blurted all that out... uit was really random..and it confused me at first XD |
| MiddiVampira 2008-02-27 ch 12, | abusewow I LOVED this story beginningt o end. I think there were only two grammer errors. And I can't wait to read book 2. You have now gained a new reader who'll keep up with updates and such. Saiba update soon |
| MoonlitChaos 2008-02-11 ch 11, anon. | abuseI can not believe I wasted my life reading this. Have you ever had that experience where you come across a piece of writing that is so horrible, that you /can't/ stop reading? That is what this is. It is utterly ridicules! Spell check spell check spell check! You misspelled basic words, confused words and even misspelled those! The entire piece is honestly low level writing, vague and full of errors. And you jump into things far too quickly without any development! Are you honestly in college? This level of writing could not get you through University standards I hope. |
| jupiter2005 2008-02-04 ch 11, | abusei noticed that you have a general and usagi's uncle(pap) name as the same. both are named kenji. i did not know if you knew that or not. it is confusing at times. just thought to let you know. |
| SerenityDeath 2008-01-30 ch 11, | abusei loved it. i was hopeing to see them married. lol. oh well i'll just have to imagine in then |
| Tori Kay 2008-01-30 ch 11, | abuseAw! How sweet! I'm sure Usagi will be overjoyed at Mamoru's propsal. Update soon! - Tori Kay |
| PriestessHelene 2008-01-30 ch 11, | abuseThe last two chapters I read through them really quickly. Thank you they were really great! |
| RoyalLovers1418 2008-01-30 ch 11, | abuseLOVED THE CHAPTER! PLZ UPDATE SOON! |
| Sol Y Sombra 2008-01-30 ch 11, | abuseThat was a really nice ending. Everything wrapped up nicely. Good job! |
| SerenityDeath 2008-01-27 ch 10, | abusewell at least she isn't afraid to be near him thats good. update soon |
| Sol Y Sombra 2008-01-27 ch 10, | abuseAnother great chapter |
| RoyalLovers1418 2008-01-27 ch 10, | abuseGOOD CHAPTER! UPDATE SOON! |