but I think the ending was very good :) that place "Sakura Haruno is dead." is perfect!

All i have to say is...AWESOME! that was really good! great even!i really enjoyed this. also thanks for commenting on my fanfiction. it made me happy. i really like chaotic cake aswell and cant wait for the next oneshot. thank you! :D

at the very end when they said she was dead i cried then i got so happy after i kept reading
i love this story thank you for making it

OMG! I LOVED the ending. That was so sweet. GAH!

What's with the wanting of flames? I liked it.

Here, instead of the flames warmth I'll send you warmth of a nice review! :D
lol

I hope you write more of these. It was great!

ignore this.
well i think you should have organized your thoughts b4 writting this story, there are some grammar mistakes shuld have been checked with,needs a better intro, also a better ending , but other wise it is pretty good.