 Marmie1955 4/6/10 . chapter 1I really, really like this story. You have a real gift and I hope you come back to this story sometime. It's too good to leave unfinished. Thank you for sharing and leaving it up. |
 Terry Kay 1/29/10 . chapter 9Well written. Good plot, nicely executed so far. with well rounded characterizations. Would be astoundingly pleased to se it finished. Thank you. |
 Gyreflight 2/2/09 . chapter 9I do like your style and your deft touch with character, so whenever I find you writing in a familiar fandom, I happily pick it up. Sadly for me, I can see that this one isn’t where your current muses are landing, but I do hope that if inspiration strikes you will be able to come back to it.
Good read, thanks.
Gyre |
 Cat Yuy 10/14/08 . chapter 9This is nice.
Any chance for more? |
 impamoudara 7/12/04 . chapter 9 Claire great to see this story moving forward. How long has it been?
I remembered the story straight away when reading this newest chapter. Great charachterisation. Looking forward to more.
Wendy |
 Violette 7/12/04 . chapter 9Ya know, I was prepared to dismiss this one, since I usually don't care for romances and OFCs in general, but I was pleasantly surprised by this story. This OFC isn't a mary sue, and the romance aspect is not overly sappy and gushy. I also like that there is a bigger story happening, aside from the romance. As long as the OFC doesn't fall into mary sue-land, where she rescues eveyone in sight and takes charge of the story, this story gets a thumbs-up! |
 BM originally 7/12/04 . chapter 9I LOVE THIS! You have a wonderful story here, and I'm dying to find out what happen's next! Really, this is a superbly written story-outstanding! Honey, you have enough talent to be a published author! Your characterizations are rich, accurate for the canon characters yet so much more in depth and rich that the men and women come to life in my mind. They are real and I've completely lost myself in your storyline! I love your view of Ezra and the rest-you've got a great story here and a wonderful sense of who the men were, are, and could be.
And I love Annabelle! She's strong and yet very human-the farthest thing from a marysue that you could possibly get, and I think she's perfect for Ezra! I'm so glad you've introduced me to her. She's a wondeful OFC and I would love to learn more about her and see more of how she and Ezra interact. She is really a perfect wife for him, and I think you've done an outstanding job with her-all your little scenes between her and Ezra are fantastic! I simply adore her!
Please, please, please update this soon! I've got to know what happen's next! Who's after her and why? Will Ezra end up getting hurt to protect her? will Annabelle stay in town (I hope I hope I hope I hope)! You've got me in suspense and I can't wait for more! |
 Emeraldred 4/9/02 . chapter 1 Please finish this off! It's really good and I want to read the end! |
 Emeraldred7 3/11/02 . chapter 1 Really really good! Please write some more soon and finish the story! |
 Emeraldred 1/24/02 . chapter 1 Absolutly great!Please finish it off it's fantastic!1 |
 M7Fan 10/12/01 . chapter 1 Please write more of this and soon!It's really really good and I really want to know how it ends! |
 Rachelle Ryan 9/12/01 . chapter 1 You certainly are mean! Very cruel indeed to leave us hanging! |
 Emeraldred7 9/11/01 . chapter 1 AAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHH please don't leave the story here,continue it,like now!Please! I have only one problem Ezra can't have a wife!Please no!And one other thing PLEASE FINISH THE STORY SOON! |
 Princess Of Quake 9/10/01 . chapter 1*stares in horror* NO! AUGH! AUUUUGH! One: Ezra can't have a WIFE! Two: You can't leave it there! CONTINUE! *runs in a circle and finally faints* M-more... gah- |
 Jediya 9/9/01 . chapter 1 Aww Hell! Ya can't leave it there. come on write more. I thought I was bad with how I leave stories.) |