:O ... It's been over a year, WHERE ARE YOU?! Yea. I just found this story this week, but it's really interesting. Maybe even the type of story I've been looking for in the Death Note section. Hopefully, you come back to this story. I know I wouldn't be the only happy person!

I’m very disappointed, you lied. I remember you stating that you never quit a story after the tenth chapter, but its been 11 months! I really really like this story I was excited about L’s feeling finally starting to come out and then you just leave it at a cliffhanger for almost a year!… now I’m just depressed…

Update please!
This story is good...
With that smooth flaw...
And perfect character responds...
More and less...
I love it!
^^

...REALLY?! You just freaking left it THERE?! Man this story is so (Infinity) the best thing I've ever read ;)

Seriously... not lying, it's the truth, I would never lie!

:P Anyway I NEED YOU TO UPDATE! Like... in three seconds... okay maybe that's a little much but REALLY! UPDATE Oh I KNOW you haven't updated for over a year... (Stern look) NOW! ;P

O_o HARSH! Man... I find that the rejection would be worse if the person hardly acted if it happened... I was like screaming to my computer "KISS HIM BACK DAMNIT!"

Anyway, I love it as always!

OMG I like started crying at the end of this chapter! This is so amazing! It is gah I hated Dame up first but then when I started to like her because Oil liked her you had to kill her! Jeez! I STILL LOVE THIS STORY SO EFFING MUCH THOUGH!

;) Niice!

ok in my opinion your ocs are like shoes...they suck and even though im a chick and im supposed to like shoe or some crap i dont they start out new and interesting [shoe talking still...] then they wear down easily and you either repair them or thrown them away and replace them and choose the latter do not do what everyone else does do not doubt the shoes! well hopefully you dont kill l that would be very sad and luckily im not that into mikimixlight anyway youre plotline is amazing and im wondering if any of the police force knows rain because he was sochiros perfect son and he was credited for that by almost everyone so im wondering also how hell react at going back to his homeland where he has no one to call family unlike whammys where he had gotten used to the odd company and the weirder people and i dont know how hell survive when he hasnt had any outside company in a while though he probably could because hes very flexible...end of this long overbearing comment/rant

wow you are making alot more chapters than the origional one shot i dont really have a complaint that i can think of right now sorry for a suckish review...

[sigh] sorry to say but i really dont like the ocs i used to lie them but now i want to throw them into a fire and dance around it i know that sounds masochistic [i think thats the right word...] but i just really hate them...really...
cause they talked behind rains back and shit id hate that if someone talked behind my back about negative things about me and i guess even through the chapters ive never grown to like your ocs and with the teachers ive grown to dislike them like i used to like the french teacher but now its terrible the only oc i like is Jax and thats just through pity and thats about all i have to say and i dont feel a god damn sorry for anything i said it is what it is and thats it...

with oil im kind of liking him kind of hating him and you're starting to make this seem as a one sided relationship

whos oil like how does he act compared to everyone else jaxs suicide was kind of expected after the change in emotion and regular habits the end

no and it was just getting good and now hes going to go away for a while no

its not really that bad and though she seems very mary sueish now i woulnt stop reading i am however at a lack of lxrain...

he had an epiphany i wonder what hes going to draw but im NOT going to look ahead cause that would be unfair...

i love the long chapters l and rain are getting used to eachother i love how he got to the birthday especially poor rain having his pride taken aaway like that...