I love how you're going with this arc! And that cliff hanger...it really surprised me. What a turnabout! I can't wait to see what happens next!

You realize we've hit the three month point again, right? :)

Phew! I'm on the second-to-last chapter you've published, and I'm really enjoying your work so far, especially the subtle foreshadowing..
I'm a stubborn L-fan, and I can tell that you're a Light fan..
Tbh, I never liked Mikami at all, or Light really, but your story has left me feeling confused, and I've actually grown to really understand their characters.. O.o
In all the fanfics I've read, this is the best Light Yagami characterization I've come across..

A few points(ofcourse :P)
-Mello, in LOTS of fics, not just yours, is exagerrated in terms of his temper. Yes, he gets bitchy, but he's not aimlessley violent, really. People just tend to think that, because you're comparing him to Near, who is devoid of emotion completely.. so ANYONE would look emotional..
Also, when Mello is 15(he's 14 atm in your fic..) and he finds out about L's death while in the room with Near, he pretty calmly steps down and says Near can be L's successor..

But apart from that, I'm very satisfied..
LxLight is such a good pairing, good luck with future chapters!
~peace nina xD

Bloody Hell, this is just brilliant. I am amazed at your writing ability, you completely draw me into a story. Well done. I am dying to see what you do with this. It isn't often that I dislike L but you sort of have me wanting to smack him for the way he is treating Rain, even though I get his reasoning and all, he should respect Raito's decisions.

I have never come across a story that is remotely similar to this. Kudos to you for originality.

I look forward to future chapters when you write them.

-K

Hello, I am Saharye. You probably don't remember me but I alerted your story sometime around the beginning half of the year and didn't leave a review. I am sorry for that.
I began reading this story when my sister recommended it to me. I wasn't very interested at first but I continued reading it and eventually got hooked. I like the way you write your story. Some people just write several really thick paragraphs and put them together, it really makes you dizzy when you look at them. Your style is much more better.
I really like L and Raito/Rain's relationship (or lack of), I think it's really sweet (in an odd way). It's rather surprising that Matsuda of all people noticed that L behaves oddly around or when talking about Rain/Raito, it is not that he isn't observant but others have more experience when it comes to it. But hey, you're the author. I'm just surprised ( not shocked to the bone and crying about it).
I really hope you update soon but don't stress yourself or do anything stupid just cause a bunch of fans told you to hurry up.

This story is so good! Don't give up on it, ok?

I am loving this story, for the two geniuses it's almost painful to see that they haven't figured out their true feelings for each other yet.

Although I don't usually like Raito/Teru pairings, I really want to see them get together for a while, before L gets off his butt, swoops in and claims Raito for his own.

Please update soon!

Nyuu... I finished it and I'm very sad, because there isn't continue... I miss it! (L)
So what can I do? - Readyour another stories again. please, I hope you will update very-very soon the new ch (L)
I1m surprised and confused - why arrested L Raito and Teru? I know, I know that it was needed, but... I don't know. I started to realize it, but I don't know what will happen... And I can't read it further! Nyüssz...
He-he... That's all!
I adore this story... but since when I read your stories I hate the word "eventual" :)

Oh, it was very sad. :( Poor Oil. I almost cry as I read his thoughts and feelings on my phone. :'(
I hope he will be a bit better.
Yes, I enjoyed the L x Raito part. They were very cute and adorable. (L)
but Oil and Dame *broke*
I think I missed that part when you wrote down, that he has an eye... *faint*
I go further - even if I can't stand up tomorrow :) I wanna know what'll happen.
Luv ya! :)

Here I am! :) I read 2 (or 3?) ch. and it's the time to write you.
I have to admit, I read it in my bed too and then I had some beautiful dreams about L and Raito.
I'm very happy, that L came back for Raito. I screamed and my mum thought that sg stung me... Of course I blushed too. I missed L so much. I told my mum, that on 31 Oct will be L's birthday - and she didn't know who is this important person/secret boy in my life... I haven't told him the truth :P
Dame... What can I say? I wouldn't go to Japan for that. She could send a message and then she wouldn't be in trouble. - but I think Teru can't kill her, because Dame is not her real name... But you said she will "stay" till the 12th ch... And this is going (for me :D) So let's see.
Oh.. BB - *blush* No comment (L)I like bad boys + L :P
Bye: Szandy Ballack

I love this fic.

I love Light and L in this... And I'm looking forward for more LxLight >DD

All the parts that are almost like they're in the original Death Note series... Like Dame's death - Naomi Misora's death, etc... Oh I just love this.

I actually didn't like Dame much and I hate Oil but... I still felt so sorry for Oil when Dame died ._.

*adds to favorites*

And update soon, please! :3

Oh, my God! I knew, I knew! I was having such a feeling from the beginning - that Clark wants something. He was too nice with Raito... Poor Raito. I wish L would know it... But I can only wish that. I can understand how he feels - Poor, poor Raito-kun.
Oh! I just had to wish :) I knew, you're the best :) - But I'm 110% sure :P.

Here again! I decided to start writting review while I'm reading it - I don't want to forget anything from my review. I love how Raito suffocating... No.. thinking of L.. How he deny that he liked this kiss - but who know what will goin' to happen - except you. However I doubt too, that L crushed on Raito - but I hope it! (I'm here: ...sure L would not so easily get a ‘crush’ on anyone.)
“I’ll just forget it,” - Oh no, he won't forget! I'm sure :P As I know your fictions :)Isee, I'm right... He starve :D - Oh, how much I adore this fic and you too!

Mello can be pretty fun and I like, when Raito or sometimes Near do in the eye :P But Mello is a bit... rude.
OMG! Raito became a bit agressive! Oh! I didn't understand what does "pansy" mean but I understand :D funny... - as Raito behave :)

I'm shocked - Oil. But he seems nice by the way.
L is adorable - very adorable and I miss him so much (I'm here: Oil and Raito are in the library)
Okay, L wrote a letter.. hm.. I'm very curious, what will Raito answer for that.

And Raito smells like strawberries? - guileful. There is a lot of notes whereby I smile :) You're the no1. :)

Oil: I adore him too, he's very nice and opposition of Raito. But I like Raito too (L).
I hope Dame won't fell in love Raito again and Raito won't reject L. But I don't know how L feels... Because
1. He wrote: Yours truly ♥ Love ya!
2. He wrote: Sometimes I forgot how young you are...
That's all :) I adore this ch.

"It seemed that the weather had frozen Raito’s brain as well, because it took him many seconds to comprehend that not only was L standing insanely close to him, but their mouths were connected." - It was my fave part of this ch. I don't have any idea for ehy he killed himself and I think you wrote it down already (I thought he fell in love with Dame... but I dunno). So... I think hugs and kisses are pretty cute but now for a year they won't meet? I'm very sad.
Oh, when I read on my phone that L kissed Raito - I dropped my phone... he-he*blush* It was fantastic. ♥

Hello! When I opened this ch, I saw it's M rated... I couldn't image, what would happen and I had a lot of idea... Fuh... :P
I like or liked Dame... I can't decide. She's always there when L and Light could be together. But she was pretty nice till she became jelaous.
When I read your A.N. I've got fear of the next ch - Black roses. What will happen? I'm very curious :) I always make commentary your A.N but it's the first time, that I wrote down them to you.
At the end I like this story and I'm very happy that Light won't became Kira.
But I've got a suspicion, who will be then... But I don't say anything :P
That's all for now - I read it further.
Bye-bye - Your fan :)