G'day there,
I liked your short story, I would believe that belldandy would give up her immortality, her goddess powers to save Keiichi and would live happily ever after, I just wish that they would at least hug and kiss on the anime series lol, their romance is so elementary grade lol.

HAHA oh my gosh, I've been writing a fanfic on my phone for about a month now and I just noticed that our opening for the stories are about the same! I've been planning to post the phone fanfic for a while now, but never found the time to start typing. Great story by the way. ^_^

cool story, are you going to continue it though I would like to see it contiued very much I am a huge fan of the series.

Interesting. Looking forward to seeing how it ends.

WOW! I really liked your story, I hope she can save Keiichi! Please update soon. Keep up the good work!

Love Inc. x