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Reviews For: It's Gonna Be Balthier

Adema
2008-01-13
ch 2, anon.
abuseBATHxASCHE SUXS! tip if u want PPL to LIKE ur fic make em longer no offense @-@ i jus skimmd since it so damn short read pros b4 tryin to write...BTW try a ASCHxVANN fic maybe u can make a decent one...though ur really gunna ned the work on decent DETAILS n sum LENGTH...m to get a bettr idea read a fic by one o my favs
OceanSapphire
2007-12-30
ch 2,
abuseThat was amazing...you started out making me cry and then made me smile!! Wonderful!!

What other couples do you like? I like this one, BaschxAshe, and BaschxPenolo.

Anyway, keep it up!

OceanSapphire

P.S. Thanks for mentioning me!
MidsummerNiteDreamer
2007-12-29
ch 2,
abuseThis was good but it should really have been a one-shot
OceanSapphire
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseOMG!! That is so wonderful!! Please, please continue! And update soon!

OceanSapphire
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