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Reviews For: Who You Are

Carmilla DeWinter 2008-05-11 ch 2,	abuseHeh, this sounds interesting, with my three favorite bots as new arrivals and Trent having Issues. I hope the new chapter isn't that long in coming, but knowing stuff that just appears out of nowhere... I can empathize.
An Cailin Rua 2008-05-10 ch 2,	abuseHmm, notice you changed the title; I kind of liked the original better. It was more of a "deep" title, if you will, in that it was more apt to inspire thought and reflection, kind of inferring that the person you are in high school is different from your ultimate person, which is so so true. But that's just my $ 0.02 ;) Right off, I really like how you start off with Trent's own ignorance regarding mortality, and his up-until-now flippant ideas regarding potentially joining the military, and how coming so close to death might have reshaped that inclination. I like also how Trent's near-death experience is explained as shaping his reactions to the bots, but also giving him some rather overt and troubling issues with his own masculinity, as if questioning his sexuality wasn't bad enough! On the concritty side- POV shift in the middle of a scene or chapter- watch for it. There was a bit here in the middle where POV was consistently Trent, then back to Ratchet, then back to Trent. Looking forward to more!
mmouse15 2008-05-09 ch 2,	abuseI love this chapter! You put so much into it, it's such fun to read. Maggie and sense of taste=WIN, BTW. Chocolate and BLTs really are wonderful reasons to eat. That scene with her and the twins and Wheeljack had me laughing so much! Trent is wonderfully done - he's scared and trying to deny it, everybody knows he's scared and they're being polite, Trent's trying to come to grips with all the new knowledge he has - Wow. I think you did such a great job writing someone who isn't completely likable right now but is growing in a direction we could like. Really well done. And Bumblebee is a total sweetheart in this chapter. He's such a fun charater, and you have the sense of fun bubbling out when you write him. I really enjoyed Sam and him and their back-and-forth exchanges. Great chapter!
ShiTiger 2008-03-06 ch 1,	abuseI've only recently found the Miles/Trent fanfiction. I can't wait to read more of your fic. If Trent knows about the autobots... how long till Miles finds out? Will they both end up with autobot partners too? (like the twins) Please update soon!
cruisecontrol61371 2008-02-20 ch 1, anon.	abuseHey...I just wanted to say that so far I am really loving the way this story is unfolding and if I could ask...please please please ( many orns of begging ) continue this story? I am very interested to see where it's going to go.
White Evergreen 2008-02-06 ch 1,	abuseWow, this is really good. It's got way more action in it than most Transformer fics I've read. Your depiction and addittude towards Trent is really surprising toward me. Most fics feature him as little more than a stupid jock who's jealous that Mikaela hooked up with Sam rather than getting back with him. You say this is going to be Trent/Miles, though? So, Miles is going to be brought into the secret of the Autobots? And poor Bluestreak! I'm relieved that he didn't make it all the way to Earth only to be killed by some lousy punk Decepticons. All in all, great start! More, please!
MajinBakaHentai 2008-01-24 ch 1,	abuseHeh, this looks interesting so far - stories where Trent gets confronted with the presence of the Autobots tend to be that way. I'll be watching. ;)
An Cailin Rua 2008-01-19 ch 1,	abuseWow, that is a pairing I absolutely would have never considered, yet find self strangely entranced by the idea. I can't wait to see how your characterize Miles, and where you go with this! The only thing I have to say in a concrit way is that you may want to describe your settings a bit more, where people are in relation to each other, etc. Other than that, I like your premise, I like how you set up Trent and fleshed him out, and also his reaction to the bots was believable and not quite so oh-well-I-suppose-one-sees-that-every-day as one often finds in fic. Looking forward to more!
mmouse15 2007-12-31 ch 1, anon.	abuseWow. Love the changes you've made - makes it even better! Sorry I've taken so long to write this - Xmas kindof attacked our household and I'm only just catching up. It's great. I like the expansions you did, they really add. I like Sunstreaker's character - you've made it come across really well; the interactions between the twins is good, and Trent is wonderful. You've really fleshed him out and made him real. I'm looking forward to chapter 2!
Dierdre 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseOh, very nice! Good characterization and use of prose, as well as a brand spanking new slash pairing. I look forward to more!
SkyHighFan 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseGood chapter. Oh god Casetecons! Soundwave's on Earth! I recignized the description of one: Ravage right? Oh and did Trent KISS Sam as you had this in the chapter: had the sudden, brief impression of lips pressing against his—and they weren’t Mikaela’s, some part of him realized. And how will a Miles/Trent relationship work out?
Tsurai no Shi 2007-12-21 ch 1,	abuseWow, great start! I really like the beginning you have so far and look forward to seeing more and the emergence of the plot. On the plus side, TrentMiles slash! XD Please update soon! --Tsurai

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