Oh my. I really enjoyed this. I loved this look into Rufus' mind and his perception of Tseng (and Rude). For some reason I laughed to myself about the fact that Tseng is a little taller than Rufus. In my head I imagined a 4 year old Rufus yelling at Tseng and then Tseng football kicked him somwhere.

Anyway...

I am happy that I decided to read this. Very good. I could see almost everything in my mind. It all had a slightly dark controlling feel to it. Perfect for our Rufus of course.

Great job.

I can't say how much I love this. You nailed Rufus's personality perfectly. Your descriptions where poetic, but cut to the point, giving off a sense of sutable atitude and style. I generally tend to portray Tseng as slightly more submissive in comparison with Rufus, but wow.
I loved the way you portrayed him, and crafted him a kind of perfect way. You made power simply seep from him, something I loved most about this short fanfic.
Keep on writing, you'll go far should you ever consider going professional :3

Dude I liked this story! It's cool I liked the idea of Rufus meeting Tseng like that, good addition XD Chapter 11 is up of Disasters XD

I really enjoyed your story, especially that part where Rufus realises he wants to have power over Tseng. The way he made them use his personal elevator was a nice touch too. I have just one thing to point out. Tseng is already second-in-command to the Turks in Before Crisis, when Rufus is only around 15. Yet, here you adressed him as 'president' which was a bit confusing.

Otherwise, nice job!

Thanks for sharing! I really enjoyed reading it, please write more! I would love to see how things evolve and you write wonderfully ^_^