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spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 7,	abuseBulzeeb needs therapy. So does Shiro--but, like--in another room, under lock and key. lolz, at first I thought this chapter was entitled 'superbra'. Quite an intriguing potrait of seven Sora-created characters--Wait, THIS IS A BOMBERMAN FIC? :explodes: -Post
spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 6,	abuseThere are only two chicks being analyzed in this story, and yet somehow they manage to be alloted with "lust" and "envy". Bring on the lulz? XD I never saw Zoniha as a porcelain doll, but I can understand Zhael's exagerration. Platonic soulmate...rowrr -Post
spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 5,	abuseMolok belongs to old kung fu movies where aged senseis kick ass while combing their beards. I suddenly want to watch "Drunken Master" again. -Post
spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 4,	abuseI wonder if 'sloth' is really considered a sin these days in our society. Or maybe I'm reading too much into my own life. LoLz, gender conflict. -Post
spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 3,	abuseIf this is "greed", I'm happily guilty. I suppose the core of humanity's sin (in the Christian sense) is the hunger for knowledge, and seeking to quench that ravishing temptation. When we pursue knowledge, we are only persuing the betterment of ourselves--at the behest of others. Yay? Nay? Hoy vay -Post
spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 2,	abuseWait...is this gluttony or greed? X_X I suppose Gluttony has its abstract meanings...and affinity towards chex mix. lolz -Post
spaceisawaste 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseLust is the least deadly of the Catholic sins? I'm intrigued... I'm even more intrigued by the idea of Zoniha desiring "to be conquered". "Hm' indeed. :moves her higher up the list: What's Regulus got that I don't? :puts hit on his head: :promptly dies of seizure: -Post?
Dantaron 2007-12-21 ch 7,	abuseFirst off, I XD'd hardcore at the author's note intro: rose-coloured glasses, looking behind the prose, and seeing the author spazflailing. XD Oh yeah. I know that feeling. =D 'nother great concept fic here. The ones I really liked were Lust, Greed, Wrath (surprisingly!), and mebbe Pride and Sloth. And I love the little tagline/concluding sentence you put on the end of each sin, they really served to drive the point home, and were each quotable in their own right. Lust was just... pure Zoniha, really. And that bit about accidental/non-accidental touch sparking desire was great - 'cause really, in a hard-and-fast relationship like they have, it would be kinda like that, oy. And the concluding sentence, again, was in one way Zoniha's profession of love - but in an entirely, and yet somehow not different sense, it puts a darker spin on the whole thing. ^_^ Well done. Greed, well, you know how much of a Bael fanboy I am. >_> Nonetheless, you really drove the point home here, short and sweet. And although I can't really relate to Bael's "awe of science" thing, you still did a very good job with that chapter - and again, very poignant concluding line. =/ Poor Bael. Wrath was pretty damn badass - probably the first time I really liked anything that came out of Molok, 'side from some stuff in-game. >_< It's interesting to look at him as the "destroy everything" type, and I love how you cast his hatred of Zoniha - she's not really the hatable type, normally. And, you did a great job in worldbuilding his home culture as a place where age is respected and revered; so much different from our modern-day. And again, great conclusion - showing Molok's manliness as well as his slowly-growing insecurity. Pride was just badass - excellent touch, using the Bulzeeb name instead of the Regulus one, and a good touch of his hate for B-man. Sloth was just depressing. as. hell. x_x There's nothing worst, really, then being sent to obscurity for all time and never being remembered, nothing to have made your mark with. The others were good, as well. ^_^ I'll be reading!

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