Reviews for When Mice Were Men

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arien 2008-09-29 ch 5, anon.	abuseYour stuff is always so awesome; are you and your friend ever going to continue this? I hope you do. :)
green ninja93 2008-07-10 ch 5,	abuseHm this is pretty good and has a nice plot going on, plus its real funny, heh kind of weird that almost all of the shows you do for fanfiction are my favorites XD keep up the good work I hope for another chapter soon XD
DaBuddha 2008-07-08 ch 4,	abuseWow. When I read "Pinky was still running from the angry mob of kitchen employees, stolen cheese in his hand, trying to get back to the room he and Brain had and lock the door before the mob got in", I said, "PEOPLE! SERIOUSLY, IT'S JUST A PIECE OF SODDING /CHEESE/!" Which is good, because when I talk back to a book, I LOVE it. (or fanfic in this case). I also LMAOed when I read: "“He didn't mean what he did. He...” Brain struggled to think of the right words. “He has a severe case of mental deficiency and stupidity. He knows not what he does and knows not to whom he speaks.” Kevin glared down at Brain, trying to see if he was lying. “Is that true?” Brain stared Kevin down and truthfully said, “...Yes.”" Because of the last line. He TRUTHFULLY said, "...Yes." This was a great chapter. Good work! DaBuddha
DaBuddha 2008-07-08 ch 3,	abuseo great cliffhanger! Awesome job. Keep it up. DaBuddha
DaBuddha 2008-07-08 ch 2,	abuseSo, Cacaxa wrote this one right? I don't remember. >_> Anyways, good job. When I found out that they weren;t clothed, I thought, "Oh. That. Is. Just. Fantastic!" -sarcastically of course- I laughed, AGAIN. You know, I love humourous stories. Great job. Keep it up! DaBuddha
DaBuddha 2008-07-08 ch 1,	abuseGreat work. I don't know how many times I cracked up, but nonetheless, it was hilarious. And for a mega-genius, the Brain doesn't catch on so quick. LOL. But then again, in our case we knew what would happen. It was great. Keep up the good work! DaBuddha
Madame Lady 2008-06-16 ch 5,	abuseHehe. x3 This chapter was delightfully clever. I love the wording and the ideas, and you've got the characters down so well...good job. C= It's going to be a mess getting Pinky a job...but then, I can see Pinky actually doing a job and liking it, while Brain manages to mess something up by trying to 'fix' things and doing things the smarter way, an apparently better way than some simple do-it-this-way job. It would just somehow fit. xD But then, you might already have plans for their jobs. shrug Just throwing out the idea.
NigaleCross 2008-06-12 ch 5,	abuseNow, they get to learn about jobs. ^-^
Pinky Lillix 2008-04-10 ch 4,	abuse"The Mother of All Cheeses". . . XD Nice. Good chapter, keep it up.
NigaleCross 2008-04-09 ch 4,	abuseAnd they never got anywhere at the mall once Pinky discovered the food court.
welshrose 2008-04-02 ch 4,	abuseOh, I wonder what fun happens at the shopping centre!
Madame Lady 2008-04-02 ch 4,	abusePinky, Pinky, Pinky. Getting yourself in trouble like that... Looks like Kevin wants to have a heart attack, with that screaming. o.o Ooh, the mall. Much fun will be had, I hope. ^^
NigaleCross 2008-03-03 ch 3,	abuseI can't wait for how the next morning is going to go.
Pinky Lillix 2008-03-02 ch 3,	abuseI like how disarming time bombs is considered a "quiet little thing". XD Lovin' this story, I am, ladies. Mouskowitz. Nyahaha. And I loved Pinky's deep thoughts. Twas great.
welshrose 2008-02-28 ch 3,	abuseOh, I liked this one! Keep them coming!

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