 NekoXNana 2008-11-22 . chapter 13aww cute! :3 But Pien has to get there fast! plz update soon |
 Grace Raven 2008-09-21 . chapter 13It's a good story, update soon. |
 Zetsu's rose 2008-07-28 . chapter 13oh cliffy love'em zetsu is going to get it if they are not careful can't wait for next chapter. |
 Ayase Reincarnated 2008-04-22 . chapter 13please, i beg you, write a new chapter! |
 Tomato-Vampire-Countess 2008-04-03 . chapter 13*Gulps* Pein...Get there soon...Pein...Hurry up... |
 J o o n g S t a r r 2008-02-05 . chapter 13ew, that ugly plant thing! I just want to put a weed whacker to it this is like the best christmas fic ever lol -anxiously waits for next chapter- |
 lover of an alchemist 2008-02-02 . chapter 13Zetsu's trying...wow thats kinda sweet! but i say Pein and Konan~ all the way |
 Stardust Ninja 2008-02-02 . chapter 12Wew, Tobi really knows it all doesn't he? |
 Stardust Ninja 2008-02-02 . chapter 11Ha! So funny! I loved the interaction between the two sides of Zetsu. Hope he finds his real feelings soon! |
 Stardust Ninja 2008-02-02 . chapter 10Nicely written! I loved how you described it from Pein's point of view and a little look into the past of their relationship. |
 lover of an alchemist 2008-01-24 . chapter 11"Mines newish, you?" The black one continued. "I've always respected Konan and such, always liked her."
"I've had strong feelings for her ever since we met..." The white part side sighed.
"But that was many years ago! Why wasn't this discussed!?" The black side started to yell in disbelief.
Omg... thats what my brothers were talking about...it kinda went like that too... I made them read it and then i fell out of my chair laughing! |
 lover of an alchemist 2008-01-14 . chapter 9"A bit tame compared to the last lot of things but the 'blossoming' thing... Creepy. I swear, whoever is doing this better not come anywhere near me for like a month when I find out which one's this!" She cussed after reading..."
Poor Pein... |
 catwomanswrath 2008-01-14 . chapter 8lol Tobi's got a little MPD goin on there XD i love how unbareably cute he can be sometimes, and yet so deliciously evil... XD well i just described myself right there... *gets distracted by tv* OMG THE FRIGGIN PEPTO BISMOL COMMERICIAL!
NIE! PEPTO BISMOL!NIE! WOTT!
anyways... oops just spamming here a bit... sowwy :3 |
 J o o n g S t a r r 2008-01-13 . chapter 8kya! Best Christmas fic ever! It's so weird thinking of Zetsu liking Konan. Pein should freakin kick his ** or something hehe. Can't wait for you to update! |
 lover of an alchemist 2008-01-13 . chapter 8evil Tobi! YAY great chapter! i love the part with Tobi talking Pein down! XD |