Very beautiful!

I hope you will continue this, it's really wonderful!

Please continue! Please, please, PLEASE continue soon! It is beautiful and amazing, and oh so tragic...

Sorry, if I weren't half-asleep I'd go into the sort of detailed review that you deserve, but for now I'll summarize. You are a very good writer! And I love how you portray the characters, especially fai who I love so much... *sigh* ...such a sad character...

I've just recently began reading tsubasa fanfics, and this is definitely one of my favorites so far. Usually the storylines are a bit lacking in my opinion, and when people write about what's going through the characters minds they just restate what was said in the series, but something about the way you wrote it made it feel a lot more real.

Also, interesting idea with the memories in the blood. It'll be interesting to see how you continue this, where the plot will lead, and I hope for more kurofai love! _

i wanna know what happens! please update! i luv this alot...angsty and cute! (in my opinion) so write another chapter! *puppy eyes* for me?

...amazing. I've never seen anything like it. The complexity and the emotion just set it above nearly everything else I've ever read. Keep going.

-applauds like an idiot on a sugar rush while sobbing- truly beautiful! oh my fandom, you are one of the most wonderful writers in all history of Kurofay fanfiction! -bowbow- I cannot live up to your true writings of beauty! you captured the emotions and the relationship just so! and it was just... perfect! there is really no other word to describe this! perfectly broken was fay, perfectly destroyed was Kurogane, perfectly written was this story! I loved it!

Mirika-puppy-san

... ... ... ... wow.

wow, that was really good. are you going to be adding another chapter, or is that the end? can't wait to see more.

-thanks :)

Any chance of the being a third chapter (pretty please with sugar on top) ? I love the feeling behind these stories, it's so fitting for Fai.

This is just an exquisite read. So so lovely. I really can't wait for more!

That was incredible... It was just so deep, heart-felt, and touching... Please update

aw so cute and sad

OH... what happens next? please update!

Good story! Can't wait for the updates!

please update soon!

Phenomenal! The perfect ending, but at the same time, I hope there's a chapter three... and four... and five! As far as your writing style goes, it, too, is amazing, but I would have someone read over it and edit it a tad before posting for future reference, just for a few insugnificant things. Other than those, which were easy to overlook, the characters were in-character, the story line was beautiful and creative, and I definitely hope you continue!