 griffenvamp 2009-08-06 . chapter 2just woundering when you going to update the story? |
 keichan2 2008-08-10 . chapter 2I'm happy to see a new chapter!
I'm considering this to be the prologue's second part, so I'm impatiently waiting for another chapter ;-)
Note that there is something strange with the chapter: there are some times two unprintable characters (001E et 001F) in the middle of a sentence...
Please update soon! |
 Greyknight 2008-08-08 . chapter 2It is good to see that this story is'nt dead. Hoping to see more of it in the future. may your creativity never end. |
 Screaming Dean 2008-08-05 . chapter 2This fanfic is very good as well as beautiful. I hope you'll keep it going. However, you might consider getting a pre-reader of some kind. Your grammar is off in some places but it's not so bad as to ruin the story. |
 StarfireGreencoon 2008-08-03 . chapter 2cool story |
 Talent Scout 2008-08-02 . chapter 2Nice story but seems a bit rushed and there's a few minor spelling errors on instead of one. Just hope we don't have to wait as long for chapter 3. |
 Redzorin 2008-08-02 . chapter 2Nice freakin fanfic. |
 Madtic 2008-08-01 . chapter 2Good second chapter.. I wonder what the fallout will be like and I look forward to reading it! |
 moritynz 2008-08-01 . chapter 2About time... nice final line.
Looking forward to the next chapter. Please dont take the better part of a year to release it. |
 Warbender 2008-08-01 . chapter 2I do love it when two of MY kind (dragons that is), get together. Now for the nuts-n-bolts of this review. I find the concept of this story interesting. Your presentation is not bad. It just needs a bit more "Tightening up". The plot flows well though the structuring is slightly off. I found that I like what I am reading, and am looking forwards to reading the next chapter. Good write so far (Though I think that this could be a bit better). Update this soon please. |
 Lerris 2008-08-01 . chapter 2This was fairly good, but you need to go back and polish things a bit. There were typos and such. Also, the Nabiki and Ranma relationship felt forced, with them magically becoming different people that now magically liked each other.. I would suggest taking more time to get to that point.. |
 Dumbledork 2008-08-01 . chapter 2I like it. A lot of mistakes, though. But did you have to name the dragon 'Draco'? Makes me think of Malfoy *shudder* |
 Vampwriter 2008-08-01 . chapter 2lol, Genma's gonna die tomorrow morning isn't he? Please update this soon! I want to see a panda skin rug before their fire place before the day is out. |
 Jerry Unipeg 2008-08-01 . chapter 2GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Ho boy, changes is coming to the NWC. |
 ss4-link 2008-08-01 . chapter 2ZOMG! I did not expect this story to be updated. Good job but there are a few errors such as writing "now" instead of "no" but nothing that big. Can't wait until the next update. |