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griffenvamp
2009-08-06 . chapter 2
just woundering when you going to update the story?
keichan2
2008-08-10 . chapter 2
I'm happy to see a new chapter!
I'm considering this to be the prologue's second part, so I'm impatiently waiting for another chapter ;-)

Note that there is something strange with the chapter: there are some times two unprintable characters (001E et 001F) in the middle of a sentence...

Please update soon!
Greyknight
2008-08-08 . chapter 2
It is good to see that this story is'nt dead. Hoping to see more of it in the future. may your creativity never end.
Screaming Dean
2008-08-05 . chapter 2
This fanfic is very good as well as beautiful. I hope you'll keep it going. However, you might consider getting a pre-reader of some kind. Your grammar is off in some places but it's not so bad as to ruin the story.
StarfireGreencoon
2008-08-03 . chapter 2
cool story
Talent Scout
2008-08-02 . chapter 2
Nice story but seems a bit rushed and there's a few minor spelling errors on instead of one. Just hope we don't have to wait as long for chapter 3.
Redzorin
2008-08-02 . chapter 2
Nice freakin fanfic.
Madtic
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
Good second chapter.. I wonder what the fallout will be like and I look forward to reading it!
moritynz
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
About time... nice final line.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Please dont take the better part of a year to release it.
Warbender
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
I do love it when two of MY kind (dragons that is), get together. Now for the nuts-n-bolts of this review. I find the concept of this story interesting. Your presentation is not bad. It just needs a bit more "Tightening up". The plot flows well though the structuring is slightly off. I found that I like what I am reading, and am looking forwards to reading the next chapter. Good write so far (Though I think that this could be a bit better). Update this soon please.
Lerris
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
This was fairly good, but you need to go back and polish things a bit. There were typos and such. Also, the Nabiki and Ranma relationship felt forced, with them magically becoming different people that now magically liked each other.. I would suggest taking more time to get to that point..
Dumbledork
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
I like it. A lot of mistakes, though. But did you have to name the dragon 'Draco'? Makes me think of Malfoy *shudder*
Vampwriter
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
lol, Genma's gonna die tomorrow morning isn't he? Please update this soon! I want to see a panda skin rug before their fire place before the day is out.
Jerry Unipeg
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
GREAT CHAPTER! (*x4) Ho boy, changes is coming to the NWC.
ss4-link
2008-08-01 . chapter 2
ZOMG! I did not expect this story to be updated. Good job but there are a few errors such as writing "now" instead of "no" but nothing that big. Can't wait until the next update.
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