"But it wasn't as if I wou–
CRASH!
Something pushed me to the ground. There was pressure on my neck for a while until I pushed whatever it was back"

LOL LOL LOL Even tho it's against my 'fanfic nature' not to review, I decided to relax my personal rules since it looks like you've gone MIA & most likely wouldn't read them anyway. I couldn't hold back on this scene since it's the most hysterical thing I've read all week::)) Absolutely perfect you chose Rose to be the one trying to eat Bella! lol lol I'm visualizing Rose gnawing on Bella's neck & getting nowhere:::)))

Definitely the best chapter so far!

i loved it!

good story i enjoyed reading it

I love this! It was so cute, well written, and awesome!

Great story!

Haha cute chap lol thats not good bella shirt is drenched

Hahah like a disco ball thqt was funny! Great chap

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A talent that makes her blend/ appear human?

great story different but great.

LOVE THIS CHAPTER. ARE U PLANNIN TO WRITE MORE CHAPTERS?

Enjoyable story. Very good.

I absolutely love how they thought about writting a book about themselves! I also like how Bella talked to James & Victoria.

I love how Edward gave Bella a bouquet of Freesia & Lavendar so she could see what she smeeled like to Edward! Poor Charlie, almost being burned to death. stupid evil vampire.

Great story. I really enjoyed it! Thanks so much!

"I sighed heavily, looking at my arm and how my palm faced outwards and my thumb down (if you’d like to try this please do. Take your left arm, hold it up, and turn it to the left so your thumb points towards the floor by using your other hand and tilting your body to the side it starts to hurt if you don’t. Now you know what Bella’s arm looks like except that’s it normally!). Bones weren’t meant to bend that way and it was rather shocking to see it on me."

I tried the arm thing, AND I POPPED IT! From finger to shoulder! It bloody hurts now! Bloody hell!

lol Love this story, though.