i dont get it. if she knows what he is, what is with all the questioning?

I loved this chapter.

8 weeks is more common in Europe, at least that I know of. In Norway we have about 7 weeks of summer vacation. : P

Love it. Same kind of mistakes, blah blah blah. Keep writing!

GREAT JOB! fantastic story!

Cool story, really enjoyed it... as for you being a Brit... couldn't have told without a sneak at your profile... I actually enjoy the occasional British word here and there, I think it is what makes you all so sweet... (love that accent, but I guess for you we Americans have the weird accent... it all depends on how you look at it)
hope you don't loose your interest and to hear more from you in the future.
Thanks again,
R.

asking about a website that converts links to mp3 files... what's up with that and it sounds pretty cool!

I am soo glad you put up Alices translation, because I thought, for a second, that I lost my mind (or all of my french)! LOL, I guess that is enough to drive the smartest vampire mad ;)

how could somebody (even if vampire) get bored at night with internet connection and a site like fanfiction online! Like the story so far, just thought if I was Bella I would be reading all these great stories all night ;)
Thanks for sharing,
R.

Loved it.
Keep writing.
Motherduckatschool

Loveed It. This is a great story. And, actually well-written. Great job. If you got any stupid reviews forget them. I enjoyed reading it. You would be a great author.

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Shay

aww this is awesome !!

Loved the story. Sorry to hear that you wont be writing for a little while but I hope inspiration strikes you good. I'd love to read a sequel to this maybe? :)

Aahah! That was AWESOME! Orginal too. I've never read a fan fic like it. On this site the stories tend to get a bit, for lack of a better word... Reptative.
Bravo *Claps*
Thanks for the amazing read..

thats it Bella you go girl