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| AvalonSummer 2008-06-24 ch 1, | abuseAw! That was some quality holiday fluff right there. Excellent job. I love all of your writing. |
| Anarra 2008-01-10 ch 1, | abuseVery sweet, and funny. |
| Mark C 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseWhat a wonderful follow-up to last year's story. Poor Clark, taken away from a nice time with his family. Well, that's what happens when you are the Man of Steel. It was nice that Lois and Jason understood and waited for Clark to return. My favourite part was at the end. Clark and Lois sharing a tender moment upon his return after he put all the presents under the tree. Then, Jason coming down happy to see his father until he sees that Clark has been eating the cookies he left out for Santa. I loved what Jason said to end the story. Beautiful ending to a Christmasy story. |
| Kloklo 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseHeart-warming:D -Kloklo |
| Iron Lunged 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseIt's a cute story, it's nice to see a charming story Jason in a family rather than having people wanting the him dead. |
| Makokam 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseawesome as always. I hope clark has a prepared, "yeah, i passed Santa on the way in" story ready. Makokam out. |
| conan98002 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuse"She drank him in, still smelling of sulphur and ash" did clark try to come down the chimney? |
| Lilbit4 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abusevery good |
| Wahoogal06 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseHappy Holidays Htbthomas! That was a really cute one shot. Lois and Jason cuddled under the afghan, not waiting for Santa but waiting for Clark; watching him as he tuned in to them from thousands of miles away; eying the camera and touching his fingertips to his lips in a gesture of love. All of this combined made for one very sweet story, perfect for the Christmas season. Thank you for sharing! |
| lere 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuseLove it! Romantic, sweet and loving. Must love this universe, dear. Thank you for this gift! Merry Christmas from Brazil! |
| CamFan4Ever 2007-12-20 ch 1, | abuse*Falls over giggling* Aww! Loved this! Happy holidays! |