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Reviews For: Change of Feathers

Lexodus
2008-07-21
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if you've been told already, but, if you love this pairing as much as I do, you will be happy to get their support to A. They get married and have kiddies! EE!! XD
Loved it!
Jovanna
2008-07-08
ch 1,
abuseaw! but there IS a support conversation with these two, but i won't spoil it for you :]. and the blood pact was signed by a previous raven king, not naesala, i think. just to clear things up :] i hope you write more stories, because i fell in love with this one :]
Suzuriin
2008-07-04
ch 1,
abuseThat was absolutely gorgeous! I developed a soft spot for this pair recently, and you definetly wrote the right kind of fanfiction I was looking for.

Good job especially on Leanne's speech. It was the right kind of awkward English that she would use.

Keep up the good job!
Mog
2008-05-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseThat was so adorable. They're my favourite couple, and you did them justice. 8) It makes up for the lame supports in RD.
FE fanatic
2008-05-01
ch 1, anon.
abusei want a lucia anyone fic m please
misken67
2008-04-17
ch 1,
abuseWow. When I read that conversation between Naesala and Micaiah just a few moments ago, I was just like...OMG.

And a few chapters back in the game, there was this really cute picture of Naesala flying...one hand grabbing Nealuchi's back as Nealuchi tried to shield himself from Skrimir, and the other held Leanne as she hugged him tightly...

I have to say, you've done a really good job on this. Especially the "opposites" part. However, I'm confused. Why is this rated M? I'd say it should be rated T...but I guess its arguable.
bluestone
2008-02-18
ch 1,
abuseVery nice. Ever since I first played P.O.R. I thoght these two would make a nice couple. Sadly I've yet to play Radiant dawn. Is it as good as the others?

Lates.
Hawk-laguz
2008-02-07
ch 1,
abuseKawaii! Aw this was great! I've been waiting for a NaesalaxLeanne story like this one! Really good job, I've been wanting to write a NaesalaxLeanne fic for a while but haven't come up with any ideas and yours was really really good. I've actually managed to come up with a story for myself now. Kudos!

Keep writing!

~Hawk-laguz
Arctic Husky
2008-01-16
ch 1,
abuseAw, this is really sweet. I spontaneously realized that I have a fondness for this pairing a couple of days ago, so I'm glad that someone out there has written such a lovely story about them.

Your writing style is really great, although I noticed a couple of errors here and there that you probably just didn't notice yourself. For one, when Naesala says, "You mean you snuck up on him?", 'sneak out' clearly makes more sense. There were some other little things like that, but nothing significant at all. I just feel compelled to point these little things out, ha ha.

Great story~
Gespens of the Hidden Dusk
2008-01-14
ch 1,
abusehaha... I love this story... 5/5.

Also, if you wanna figure more about this pairing... get an 'A' Support with Naesala, and Leanne. Also, a pairing suggestion, is... Janaff and Lucia! I am fed up with the lack of that pairing. same with IkexElicia.
Volke the Ninja
2008-01-13
ch 1, anon.
abuseI love Leanne and Naesala! I'm so glad they marry at the end even if its a support! I knew Naesala had feelings for Leanne in PoR.
FlamingDoritos
2008-01-06
ch 1,
abuseE, It's SO AWESOME! YAAY! Love how well it's been done. FAVED!
nobody
2007-12-24
ch 1, anon.
abusegood job, but you should proof read:(
Mini Nephthys
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseThat was cute, and oh-so perfectly written! Haha, and Nealuchi would secretly try to get them together, I bet.

By the way, if Naesala and Leanne get an A support, they'll marry. So it's not like the game completely ignores the pairing...
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