You did this well. Most people on here are morons, write it "normal", forget that some words might not translate, use things that require sound to work right. This is pleasant - it feels right.

I won't ask how they learned so much, so... fast? Then again, you still haven't told us anything.

He... can't speak? Or hear? That's why what he's "saying" is in italics?

If I'm wildly off, oh well. Not much you're telling us, here. It's intriguing, so far. Interesting. Good.

It smells funny in here. You didn’t bring your girlfriend here and have SEX all over my COUCH, did you?

Yes. Every day.

LOL

OOh, I really loved it.
I must say at first i was REALLY lost, but it became more clear through the chapters. I loved the House/Wilson dynamic (thanx for not putting the slash :D ) and I really liked this 'only conversation' writing style.
Cheers :P

Yay, deaf!House. (I'm writing a deaf!House fic too, but with a different cause... Someone told me there was another fic where House loses his hearing floating around out here, and I found it.) Honestly, I didn't know there were others out there. :)
But for me knowing American Sign Language, this made me laugh several times. Like "Sarcasm and Sign Language don't mix" Haha, you got that right. So do you know ASL or did you just reaserach it or something? Because if not, you got it pretty well for not knowing it.
But, good job. I read all 13 parts without stopping. I loved the House/Wilson dynamic. I think you captured it perfectly.

again good chapter but this is where im going to have to stop..i have other things i need to do ill read more when i get a chance

there were a lot of lines in this chapter that i liked ill put some here:

You could have been less nosy. (sounds like something House would say.

Sign language and SARCASM don’t MIX. (we all know House is all sarcasm)

I have a patient who’s deaf.
How CHARMING. The little boy and his doctor have a SPECIAL BOND. (again this is definantly in House's voice)

Little boy knows how to swear?
Why do you think all me patients are children? There are BALD-HEADED dying old people, too.

I could Google some new words. ( everyone loves google :))

Yeah i know i just recited ur lines to you but whatever those are the ones i liked.

this had me wondering whats the secret, but then i remembered i already know lol. yes i remember that you dont like acronyms but whatever...moving on

ok i know i did read this chapter before, or maybe thats because i have inside info...either way ill keep reading

ok so maybe i havent read since chapter 4...opps. :) anyways good chapter just one thing thatas bugging me in this dialogue:

House, I can’t talk to you if you don’t look at me.

That’s the idea.

how can house say that's the idea apparently he's not looking at wilson so how did he know wilson said "House, I can’t talk to you if you don’t look at me."

anyways on to the next chapter

hehe...but he doesn't have a tty machine yet...how is he going to order? :D

Aww...and it's the end of the fic which means I can't leave anymore...over analytizing reviews ;.;

But somehow House and Wilson's going on with life like normal makes everything all better. House is still deaf, but they ignore it and go on. Yay for the bittersweet happy ending! :D
Because we all know they just wouldn't be House and Wilson if it was all sunshine and puppies.

And Wilson is still sticking true to his bet; devious. >:)


Good luck with the rest of your fics! I'm excited for Checkmate; think of all the crazy-long reviews I can do for that! I'm still working on 'Reality Lies', better known as the 'Self-Stripping' continuation (my title sucks); but I'm also participating in Wilson_Fest so...it might take a while for an update. ;)

All-in-all I loved keeping up with this fic and greatly enjoyed reviewing and finding out all the clues. I hope to do this again. Thank you for such a fun fic!

WOW.
Fantastic work!
This is the best dialog fic I've ever read!

Please don;t tell me that this is it! What about the first surgery? Something about his kidneys, I think it was? What did that have to do with this surgery? And what about Cuddy and Careon and Chase and Foreman? What do they think of this, and why would Cameron and Cuddy feel guilty?

oh my gosh. I loved this story from beginning to end, and this last chapter was such a perfect (and happy!) conclusion. Thanks for consistently updating, and I cannot wait to read more from you!