that was good loved it

GREAT STORY!

Aw. I loved this! You really brought out Booth's sweet side, it was positively adorable :) The ending was perfect! Amazing work. Lepi xo

This is perfect! Seriously, just wonderful.

"This is his idea of perfection; his Parker and his Bones, standing beside him, full of love and happiness." I fully believe that's Seeley Booth's idea of perfection and sooner or later some such scene will take place.

Great job.

I was so excited for a minute, but then he HAD to be imagining it! But I love this. I love all your Bones stories, as a matter of fact... I read one and then I started reading them all. Keep up the good work!

that was cute.

In this story, there is a very relaxed and calm atmosphere, although for a split second, you can almost hear Booth's heart breaking.

Aw, so sweet! We wish that happened too, Booth! Keep up the good writing!

Loved the twist at the end. It captured that absolutely lovestruck look on his face perfectly.

Doc

aw great work!

Aw, Booth! Couldn't you just launch yourself at him in that moment? Lovely to think that he might want her too.

Loved it!

Hehe...I had a ton of remarks about how Brennan was so OOC and then you go and ruin them (and my squeal nonetheless) by making the whole kiss a figment of Booth's overactive imagination! Cute.

No blaring grammer or spelling mistakes and the characters seemed well portrayed (in the end!)

Kudos.