Wow, this was really well written.

wow ... it made me cry

how could you write something so beautiful

so tragic ... such emotion

wow

That Is One Of The Most Amazing Things I Have Ever Read.It Was Beautiful And It Had So Much Emotion And Ways About Life It Was So Incredible.I Really Can't Put It Into Words Just That That Was So Beautiful.

Heartbreakingly wonderful.

Tragic and beautiful.

The passion and emotion in this was perfectly portrayed, making me forget reason in my reaction to this.

Your style is unique and captures the story in an almost apathetic way- we are not caught up in one character's pain and emotion, instead seeing all in an uncaring fashion, like the bitterness is in a faded photo, we understand, but we do not feel for it.

Well, I'm rambling, aren't I?

Brilliant job :)

Awesome and beautiful! But sad :(

This is the best story I have ever read in my entire life! I didn't really like the plot... but your writing style is impeccable!

This was brilliant. I have no other way to descibe it. With the imperfection that you brought into their lives, you reached perfection

This story talking about an imperfect life--imperfect beginning, imperfect development, imperfect ending--was perfect. You don't need another chapter, nor a sequel, nor anything to say, "wow". I adore this piece--I thirst for more!

that was insane, you have unimaginable talent that no one else does.

Whoa, that is amazing! I really loved it, I have never read anything like that, or written in that style! Truly amazing, I look forward to reading more of your work!

Wow, that was amazing! I'm normally not one for couples other than the original set by the book, but this was amazing! You wrote it so well! I'm jealous of your tallent! It was so sad, but at the same time I can sort of see something to that respect happening, the family just exploding at eachother. Keep up the fantastic work.

wow. that was very passionate and very...whats the word?...very real, i guess. it was all very true, raw emotions and i loved it. i would love to see it in classic story form, but i think it is great if you leave it like this.

whoa...that was deep...

That was seriously depressing, but very well written. You've got a gift. It was a very meaningful piece, and while that would probably never happen, or so I feel, it had a lesson everyone in this life must learn on their own. I was extremely moved by this piece, definately going on my favorites, and I'm glad you wrote it.

-Jamie