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| ColdAsIceGirl 2008-08-16 ch 1, | abuseSo, do you mean that Hermione is Bellatrix's daughter? If so, I like it. But why does it say that her baby's name is Atria, if it's Hermione? Either way, I like it. Please keep writing it; I think it's a really good plot idea, especially for a first story. |
| Pepa333 2008-07-09 ch 1, | abuseLOVE IT SO FAR! :) PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :) |
| seraphinn 2008-05-20 ch 1, | abuseAre you going to continue? I hope so. |
| That Lady Over There 2008-03-06 ch 1, | abuseWhat! I never reviewed your story?!! I thought I did! Oh well. My lovely Melilissa! Here's my review! Nifty story! Gee wilickers!! |
| jewell 2008-02-15 ch 1, anon. | abuseGreat start. When are you going to update? |
| minnieluff 2008-01-18 ch 1, | abusei like it alot (: I want you to start adding the chapters xD I think what will make the story sound better is using some kinds of idioms in it? But any ways the idea is great and i hope to hear some more |
| nextbestthing 2008-01-09 ch 1, | abuseYou should continue. I think, though the chapter was short, it was very good. I think it will make an interesting story. |
| Moterola 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseGood writing. Write more though. Maybe better words? |
| themistressmalfoy 2007-12-26 ch 1, | abuseThis is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter. |
| Aslan'sWhiteWitch 2007-12-23 ch 1, | abuseI hope Rodolphus is her father in most fic I see he is often snubbed for another man. Any way good start. |
| ravenaurelius 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abusecool story |
| SynergyFox 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI like the story so far. Keep it up. |
| ooosk 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseGreat first chapter1 Can't wait for more! |
| Vanessa 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseIts really good. You should continue. |
| HPaddict 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseloved it. it's definately an interesting concept. I can't wait to read it. It has me wanting more already. |