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ColdAsIceGirl
2008-08-16
ch 1,
abuseSo, do you mean that Hermione is Bellatrix's daughter? If so, I like it. But why does it say that her baby's name is Atria, if it's Hermione? Either way, I like it. Please keep writing it; I think it's a really good plot idea, especially for a first story.
Pepa333
2008-07-09
ch 1,
abuseLOVE IT SO FAR! :)
PLEASE UPDATE SOON! :)
seraphinn
2008-05-20
ch 1,
abuseAre you going to continue? I hope so.
That Lady Over There
2008-03-06
ch 1,
abuseWhat! I never reviewed your story?!! I thought I did! Oh well. My lovely Melilissa! Here's my review! Nifty story! Gee wilickers!!
jewell
2008-02-15
ch 1, anon.
abuseGreat start. When are you going to update?
minnieluff
2008-01-18
ch 1,
abusei like it alot (:
I want you to start adding the chapters xD
I think what will make the story sound better is using some kinds of idioms in it?
But any ways the idea is great and i hope to hear some more

nextbestthing
2008-01-09
ch 1,
abuseYou should continue. I think, though the chapter was short, it was very good. I think it will make an interesting story.
Moterola
2007-12-27
ch 1,
abuseGood writing. Write more though. Maybe better words?
themistressmalfoy
2007-12-26
ch 1,
abuseThis is really good. I can't wait for the next chapter.
Aslan'sWhiteWitch
2007-12-23
ch 1,
abuseI hope Rodolphus is her father in most fic I see he is often snubbed for another man. Any way good start.
ravenaurelius
2007-12-22
ch 1,
abusecool story
SynergyFox
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseI like the story so far. Keep it up.
ooosk
2007-12-21
ch 1,
abuseGreat first chapter1 Can't wait for more!
Vanessa
2007-12-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseIts really good. You should continue.
HPaddict
2007-12-21
ch 1, anon.
abuseloved it. it's definately an interesting concept. I can't wait to read it. It has me wanting more already.
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