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| Feral Smile 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseWhy would you jack a part of the game's actual text? Dude we've played the game, that's why we're reading the fiction. We don't need an explination of what an AC is. Armored Core. Pretty obvious. And no bullet, not even an AC sized grenade laucher, is big enough to destroy a town, no matter the size. I grew up in a town with 63 people, total. You need to realize how small AC's are. Pick up Armored Core: the Last Raven, or go to youtube and watch the intro. They are not huge. Why the hell would someone refer to their home as pathetic? Oh, with a prelude this short, include the first chapter. This took you, what, six minutes to write? |
| sodagod 2008-01-15 ch 1, | abuseyou should never put out a prelude this short without imeadiately putting the first chapter out. a 1st grader could write this in about 5 minuts. |