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| BreathLessFaith 2008-06-30 ch 8, anon. | abuseWhat a shame about Michael. Poor Patrick all his skill and it still wasn't enough. While I'm always for Sexis...I loved how Patrick turned to Alexis. Great story. I hope to read more soon! |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2008-06-29 ch 8, | abuseWhile I would kill for Sexis to get together after this I need Paxis . . . Like seriously. And I totally know you're a Sexis gal but I can't help it. For like the first time ever, I'm not rooting for Sexis. The way Patrick came to Alexis after what went down with Michael . . . It was just so brutally honest and emotional . . . Their need to comfort and heal each other was so beautiful and so palpable . . . You've got to put Paxis together, seriously. |
| MoonlightGardenias 2008-06-07 ch 7, | abuseI'm glad to see this one updated. An interesting turn of events at the end there; Patrick getting called in because of an accident, and Sonny somehow being involved. It's not Max and Michael, is it? I mean, I suppose that it could be. Anyway, great job; looking forward to more. |
| IlovetowriteSMP 2008-06-05 ch 7, | abuseSo, what do you say?” he asked his face directly in front of hers. Her lips came to his before she pulled back and smiled, “so are you going to teach me how to play with your race cars?” Dimples ablaze, “anytime” O HOT! I like that part. Really love the Sonny and Kristina scene. GH seriously needs to do more with Sonny/kristina. Worried about michael! Can't wait to read that next chapter. |
| mannysbaby24 2008-06-05 ch 7, | abuseOMG Ayshen that was awesome as always! Ok now the triangle is set, oh how I wish this would play out on our tv screens *sigh* But oh well. Now who was in an accident?! Please not Sam I actually like her in this story. But anyway please update soon and by soon I mean yesterday! :) |
| Elizabeth Perry 2008-06-05 ch 7, | abuseIt's about time! I'm loving Patrick/Alexis, Sexis is moving along slowly with Sonny realizing that he wants to be up to Alexis's standards again (I love that part)! Patrick/Alexis work well and I'm as always in awe of your awesome taste in music! |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2008-06-05 ch 7, | abuseOkay, first of all you updated, YAY! I'm more than thrilled that you've done that considering this story has always been a fave of mine. I love the way you write Patrick and Alexis . . . You totally have me longing for Paxis to happen on the show. It would definitely be smokin' that's for sure. And then you tug on my heart strings with Sexis. I totally love Sexis but for this story I'm totally rooting for Paxis. I know you promised a triangle and you're definitely delivering in the triangle aspect but I still want my Paxis. I loved how Patrick went to Alexis and put it all out there on the line. Telling her how he wanted her and that age was nothing but a number and numbers didn't bother him. Can you say totally hot and uber swoonworthy? Cause I can. There kisses were hot. Definitely hot. Loved that Patrick can make Alexis loosen up and feel the passion that's obviously brewing between them. The accident page that Patrick got and the phone call Sonny got have me worried and I can definitely see the triangle aspect rearing its head with what's going to happen next. Obviously Alexis is going to be there for Sonny and it'll be interesting to see how Patrick handles this. On that note, all I can say is I want my Paxis. Please? |
| BreathLessFaith 2008-04-08 ch 6, anon. | abusePersonally I see nothing wrong with playing with your toys. Where Patrick went wrong was not giving Alexis a car and showing her how much fun it was to race them. I'm happy for Robin and Nikolas. That was a sweet moment between her and Sonny remembering Stone. Thanks for sharing...Hope to read more soon! |
| jeffandjimmieschick 2008-04-07 ch 6, | abuseOkay . . . . I'll admit you promised a triangle and you delivered. We've got our triangle. But I still want to end up with this being Patrick and Alexis. For some reason I'm just all about them when it comes to this story. And I love Sonny and Alexis. Just not in this story. But you did a great job showing the triangle with having Alexis beginning to realize just how young Patrick is. I loved her conversation about it with Diane. She was hoping Dr. Feel Good would give her a physical but he was playing race track with his wittle friends. Hilarious! I love how Sonny finally admitted that he needs to start making changes. Envoking Stone's memory was a nice touch and true to history because I doubt Stone would be proud of Sonny now. I love the relationship he and Robin share so I'm glad you through that in there. This story is just getting better and better. Hopefully we'll get more Patrick and Alexis next time. I would love to see him interacting with Kristina and Molly. Sonny would definitely see red if that happened. Update soon. |
| IlovetowriteSMP 2008-04-07 ch 6, anon. | abuseYou're back! Yay! I was thrilled to see this story updated. You are the total reason I ever started liking Sexis. LOL at Cassius in this chapter. Loved the song choice and that Sonny and Kate are over. I'm rooting for Sexis all the way in this. Soulmates should always win out. Fantastic update. Looking forward to more. |
| NuYawker 2008-03-24 ch 5, | abuseWell, where's the rest of the story? I lie in wait. |
| NuYawker 2008-03-24 ch 3, | abuseI've been in a reminiscing mood myself lately. Thanks for this, brings back memories. |
| NuYawker 2008-03-24 ch 1, | abuse"Why'd you give up on me?" The question so many fans wondered. Until we remember that it was Guza. Damn him. This is a good start, can't wait to read more. |
| lo 2008-02-12 ch 5, anon. | abuseSo as much as I like the thing with Alexis and Patrick...PLEASE tell the Sexis fan in me will be happy eventually!! Love it! More Please!! |
| MoonlightGardenias 2008-02-12 ch 5, | abuseI actually like the Patrick/Alexis a little, though I admit I'll always be a Sexis fan at heart. Love that Robin and the babies are okay; looking forward to reading more. |