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| Satoshistar7 2008-04-15 ch 2,  | abuseHi Honda, Listen I think you need to have your story looked over by someone else and spell-checked to make it even better. Your story has potential, but it is very difficult to read due to the changes between past and present tense and spelling. Keep up your story, but make sure to have someone edit it. Sincerely, Satoshistar7 |