 Naa-chan 7/10/03 . chapter 1DUDE! I love it! Yeop, it's me again! Hihi! I love your stuff! Just love it! This one was just too cute! _ |
 SaturnAngel 8/11/02 . chapter 1 Kawaiiness! . prolly one of the best song fics i've ever read! great song choice too! . can't say much more about how i love your fic! |
 chibi obake 12/1/01 . chapter 1 awwww! sweet! i wish i had that kind of relationship...- except i wouldn't want him to leave |
 VanillaRage 11/1/01 . chapter 1How charming! |
 lija 9/10/01 . chapter 1 Very sweet and waffy...) |
 Moonlady 9/8/01 . chapter 1:! KAWAII !) |
 Sila-chan 9/8/01 . chapter 1 I like this story, but it's so sad! But I like the ending...it's really deep. |
 LinaDuck 9/8/01 . chapter 1AWWWWWW HOW CUUUUUUTE! AW! GREAT SONG CHOICE! _ |
 Ranko-chan 9/8/01 . chapter 1 AAAAAAW THAT WAS SO SWEET! I WAS planning on writing a fic with this song, but you finished it first. O well, yers was better! _ |
 mmkay 9/8/01 . chapter 1! I LOOOOOOVVVVVVEEEEEEEEDDDDDDDD IT! THAT WAS SO KAWAII!:sighs sheepishly i felt all tingly inside at the end...::blushes RANMA AND AKANE FOREVER! |
 Ling Mao 9/8/01 . chapter 1I like how you didn't have the kiss as something that took to long, but rather, was quick and natural. |
 Growly Genet 9/8/01 . chapter 1Awww... what can I say about it? It's beautiful and really sweet as well. And you don't just toss them together like I've seen people do before. The characterizations are believable, and I think you captured Ranma's feelings quite well. I like the imagery, and the use of repetition in parts. And the ending was sweet without being overly sappy.
The only problem I had was the lyrics, in some places it was hard to tell which were the song lyrics and which parts were the story. Not that that's a bad thing, since you integrated them well, but it might have cut down on the confusion a bit.
All and all a very wonderful little fic. It's going on my favorites list. Keep up the good work! |