|Reviews for Helen|
| Anon 1/24/12 . chapter 1
This is completely ridiculous. Your sentence and paragraph structure is completely dreadful. I about tore my own eyes out after the first two lines! The plot is a joke. TELL us why she hates her mom, why her mom has a hard time saying "I love you" to her daughter, give us a setting and some details.
And what do all the assorted powers have to do with the character? I get how the super-speed affected the story, but what did the rest have to do with it? Why did we need to know that she ran at exactly 87.5 MPH?
Sorry, but this story is complete and utter crap.
| Ashley 11/29/11 . chapter 1
The plot was very weak! It did not make sense at all!
| stevieLUVSAlex 8/15/10 . chapter 1
Hahaha kinda cute :)
| Dan Sickles 3/3/10 . chapter 1
Good story, even if it's not "really" Danielle Steel. Just for fun, I think I'll do a Daniel Steel parody now. Thanks for opening up the category!
| brazzumrazzum 7/7/09 . chapter 1
wtf? this is not danielle steel, though it is kinda interesting, it need some editing
| baby bud 5/27/09 . chapter 1
That was great. i have never read any of her books but this is really good.
| Xephia 2/26/08 . chapter 1
I haven't read any Danielle Steel, but this story is good, albeit short.
BTW, how did you convince them to make a section for the story when your the only person who's written a fan fiction? I emailed them asking them to make one for 'As Meat Loves Salt' but they haven't replied XD
| Elsawitch 2/26/08 . chapter 1
This is really great! You should keep going.
| nejyille 2/22/08 . chapter 1
I agree with the first one who reviewed your work... What does it have to do with Danielle Steel. Steel is a novelist... Bittersweet, Zoya, Thurston House, kaleidoscpe, etc. are just some of her good works. Anyway, you have an idea of a good story but the construction suffered. You should have expounded your concept... Nice attempt...
| LadyVi 12/29/07 . chapter 1
well,its imaginative!but is it to do with danielle steel?
lol, its definitely a good effort anyway!