I wish that you were Updating this story too.

--lilith Kayden

It was an interesting chapter, reminds me of some of the Holocaust books I've been reading lately.

An Amazing start and first chapter. It is a chilling story. Very well-written, I really like it! Keep writing!

okay to be honest.
im really really lost.
but after rereading this and the previous i kind of get it.
i guess im waiting for another chapter before passing judgement.
update son!

Hmm. Yes, I did find this short, but I'm not sure if that's just because I would love to read more!

I dunno about this chapter; I was a bit worried about the use of tenses. In the fourth paragraph from the bottom, in particular, you switched from past to present to past and back again and I felt that broke the flow a bit. (That, and you might want to fix the typo in "There where others like her")

Having said that, I'm still loving the OC thing you're doing, and I like the way you're telling the story from the point of view of an underdog - someone who's a "quiet one", a "face among the crowd". Good stuff.

I like that chapter! It's ok if you decide to keep a chapter short. I hope you update soon cause I can't wait how it goes on.

Okok, this is pretty good so far, then again, all of your stories are "pretty" good, at least, soo...
xD
And yes, it IS a short chapter, however I think it's more of a plot fillery thing, so I don't mind. Not like I can pressure you into writing more, or anything >;P

Heh.
Apologies, but I MUST ask; will you be writing a proper sequel to Redemption?

Awesome! OC's! The use of the diary structure gives us a unique look into the life of a civilian during book seven. I was really happy to read this, because as much as I love the Trio, I can't help but think that in some fics they feel rather "tired". Your piece is fresh and shows a deep sense of creativity. Can't wait to read more!

Interesting, can't wait for more.

This is a really intriguing beginning. I love the way your character is writing, her bravery and her hoping that things will work out. I want more...

I love the way you're writing! And I love dark fics, particularly such that describe how the wizarding world would be like after the dark side won. So I just can say that I want to read more. So please update asap!

that was a reely rely great story! cant wait till you write more!

love it, it just makes everything seem so so real how you wrote it. the fear that you have portrayed is amazing. well done.

loved it.
cant wait for more of this new fic.

Good to see this story back up.
I alwayed liked this story. update soon and have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years.