I really liked this. Very interesting idea. I loved the bits with Sammy's claustrophobia, made everything better. And I really liked a nice spirit.
hugs...empath

This is an interesting story idea, but you can't actually get admitted into a prison/hospital for the criminally insane just by jumping of a bridge... no matter what nonsense you were saying. Dean couldn't just have walzed in there with Sam.

Very powerful and tense story, Christy, with gorgeous characterizations and sweet banter between the brothers. I loved the 'Batman' discussion in the end.

I was really chewing on my nails almost the entire time; your writing was that superb.

In a (maybe) nasty way I'm glad the spirit finally found his peace (read: revenge) and someone who understood it. But then, the Winchester boys have some advantage concerning spirit work on their side...

Thank you so much for ending this tale on a hopeful note. I don't think I could have taken a different one.

that was very entertaining and I really enjoyed reading it!

Thanks for posting

xZx

That was an amazing story! The suspense nearly made me chew my fingerfails off; you sure took the boys for a ride they won't forget any time soon. Your fic was well-written and flowed at a fine pace, plus was very well planned-out. I very much enjoyed your characterizations of Sam and Dean, how protective they were about each other. And I want to thank you for the fantastic backstory of Sammy's claustrophobia, which really made sense for this story and provided the perfect background for his panic attacks when tied up.

The prisoner-despising staff of the asylum was definitely hard-core mean, not only to the brothers but to the prisoners in general. I clearly hope they aren't the common guards for such institutions.

I really enjoyed this story, Christy. I decided to wait until you were done to start reading, then I read it all in one sitting. I don't have to wait impatiently for updates this way:) I liked the plot you cooked up as usual, and you even knocked Dean around a little, so thank you!

Kelly

that was brilliant no ending doesnt suck

ooh i loved this story along with all the others you wright

Aha, so the ghost was a death omen, just like Claire in the Usual Suspects, nice! If there's anything who could've seen past the black-and-white and recognized the spirit for what it really was, it's definitely our thoughtful and compassionate Sammy! Pretty cool how the spirit repaid Sam for his understanding by saving him and Dean from those crazy guards! Organ-harvesting...ICK! Insane ppl or not, that's definitely no excuse for brutal murder! Good thing the ghost gave them their just desserts before they carved up Sammy...our boys are fine and now the mystery is solved! YAY!

Good work as always! I'd say I'm looking forward to your next story, but I see it's already up, LOVE THAT! LOL. And - hint, hint - I'm already hooked! :-D

Good on the spirit! I'd do the same if someone murdered me for my organs! I know I'm an organ donar, but I'd prefer it if my organs were removed AFTER I died!

Anyways, great story. Sad that it's come to an end.

Medusa.

P.S Didn't Dean say about feeling like Batman in one of the new episodes? Anyways, I can't wait to see episode 10, but have to wait until you guys finish with 10, 11 and 12 before I can get it. We're only on episode 2 here, and that was a freaky episode! Ben seemed too much like Dean to NOT be his kid.

awesome ending!! you did a great job! on to the next! :)

It was a fine ending. I loved this story. It was so so awesome. Great job:D

AWESOME AWESOME JOB. I am so incredibly sad that this story has reached the end, but, like any great story, it will be read again at some point. I think that you did an amazing job of portraying the characters, and the show as a whole all throughout. It worked. You nailed it.

Great fic! can't wait for the next one!

Hi, Don't worry about the ending, it was just perfect. I'm so pleased the spirit lived up to the promise it showed earlier.
Looking forward to reading more from you soon. x