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| 1jennyfan 2008-03-20 ch 1,  | abuseAww, so CUTE! And you're lucky, this is my first ever review! I could totally relate to Toph. If my crush gave me a gift, I would be SO giddy. It's funny, I actually find him a lot like Sokka. Anyway, great job! |
| Fanwoman 2008-01-25 ch 1, | abuseAbsolutely delicious! I love her reluctance and denial of anything "girly." That she wouldn't let Aang play with it was so funny and revealing at the same time. Thank you for this lovely episode tag! |
| animeroxz 2007-12-28 ch 1, | abuseI liked this oneshot! It was very sweet and cute! |
| Cows are my friends 2007-12-27 ch 1, | abuseGood story. |
| Superbleh11 2007-12-25 ch 1, | abuseI liked this little oneshot. You explored a really cool idea with it, about the origins of the armband and the whole bracelet concept, and it really came across well. One thing I was very impressed by was your ability to portray Toph as still being tough and brash, but still wrestling with these emotions and ideas that are very foreign and embarrassing for her. Kudos for that! The contemplations were very nice, and your voice was very conversational and pleasant to read. The only thing I felt that this piece lacked was description; I'd like to really feel things from Toph's POV as opposed to only exploring memories and immediate actions. Very cool, keep up the good work! Superbleh11 |
| ThumperMiggles 2007-12-22 ch 1, | abuseKyah~~ So cute! Friggin fairy rings... That one made me laugh so hard... ^^ |
| Cra-z4Avatar 2007-12-22 ch 1, anon. | abuseLOVED IT! ur an awesome writer! Keep it up! (Toph's my fav character, and though I don't really care that much about Tokka, u really pulled me in!) |
| It is everywhere. - Chuang-... 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseuh, obsesive much? you make toph sound way too girly and idiotic. |
| Jezkalynn 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseAww, too cute! Another perfectly in-character little fic. Please keep doing these! You get into Toph's head so well. I'd love to see your take on some other recent episodes... ;-) |
| Coeus 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVery cute. I like how you wrote Toph, insecure and awkward but brashly trying to hide it. Excellent job. |
| TophFanGirl 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThat was adorable, yet so Toph like at the same time...Does that make sence...haha..well anyway great job |
| Total-KH-Fan 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseI liked the story a lot, and the detail was amazing. :) |
| Solembum13 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseVERY NICE! I love it! I was so happy when this episode came out, pure Tokkaness! :D Keep on writing! |
| Tokkalover 2007-12-21 ch 1, | abuseWow, this is great! You really made this good! My favorite part was "I don't like it THAT much.." Lol. (I certainly count that armband as a gift fom sokka.) |