Oh sad for the poor vampire- even though Edward and Bella belong together- her story is still sad. I think I'll go read the next oneshot about her. Great job.

You know, I have never thought that much about Edwards past. It seems like every ones always going to the future. Even though this oneshot made my teary, I thought it was very original and well thought up. You have some good ideas. (and I also thought your grammar was great as well) Even though the thought of him loving someone else was hard to grasp. It's better that always hearing the depressing parts of his past. At least he was happy for a time.
Kudos! :D

are you gonna write more.

its good