How cute! Loved it!

I that was so funny! It was cute and sweet and hillarious! The only fault I could find with it was Snape was a bit ooc but it was still really good!

I actually liked it. it was a fun read. happy and joyful and funny. I liked it, this is one of those stories that makes me smile for hours.

I liked it. Sorry, I suck at constructive criticism so lets just stick with that.

Much thanks and love
~Kits

oh man that was funny
some bits didnt make musch sense - like why would snape be there?
but honestly i didnt care coz i was laughing so damn hard!
:D

lol i was giggling the whole time i read this haha :) i feel so much lighter and happier now :) thank you! hehe :) this is just a sweet and happy-go-lucky piece. i really enjoyed it!

Constructive criticism? Yes - quit kicking yourself. Yes, you are young. So what? It's a lovely, hilarious, innocent moment. The poem is an inspired choice. Only small problem I noticed is that you keep writing 'sunset' when you clearly mean 'sunrise'. That's minor and easy to fix.

It was cute, I liked it but... part of it seemed a LOT like a scene from Celebony's Recnac Transfaerso. Did you mean for that?

Oh, that was so cute Scorpia! (this is Elise, if you didn't know)
I love the [art when Ron goes up and grabs Harry. I was thinking in my head, DON'T DO IT RON! DON'T! But then, it was fine, cuz he stopped. I also love that Snape smiled in the end. Something for all us peeps on Potions and Snitches?
hehe. That was great, I'd love to see a sequel!
-Elise

You need a beta, and be a bit more patient when you write. You had a good idea, it could have been developed in something not-so-rushed-up to read.

OH very good -- I laughed right along with them! I hope you do write more.

Happy Holidays
Sam

do it do it do it. i loved this

yes you should now i must go and continue reading stories i am doing a marathon... not really just dont like to actually do coments.

i thought it was great i hope you do the sqeaul my fav. part was when hermione took the pic. of harry and ginny (lol)

omg i almost pee'd reading this.

I loved the poem, its beautiful.