This... is amazing. And I absolutely love it. You always manage to capture the two of them so well. You're utterly fantastic, and I love your writing style. A true inspiration.

I love your style. I've been using something similar for a while, and costed me a good amount of weird looks, too...

I just wanted to say that you five lines when they - god, so much hotter and sexier than those usual six paragraphs of the most used and abused sentences. Sex scenes are stereotype galore in this fandom, but this.. this is something else. You can write. Which is different.

This was just awesome. It read like prose poetry; incredibly romantic and highly emotional. Great work with the characters... like I said, I'm a little stuck on 'just plain awesome.' :)

This fandom doesn't get enough love in my mind, but you write it wonderfully!

Wow, that was absolutely amazing! Excellent work =D

I... LOVED this. Normally I don't go for prose poetry, but that's exactly what this is. Ay May Zeen. The way this was written allowed me to forget the words were there at all and just see the image. I felt almost like I was watching something instead of reading it. It was wonderful!

And I have to say... Your description of their *cough* first time *cough* is more... erotic with its lack of details than most of the Tsusoka smut I've read. Very, very, WELL done! ^_^

That was fantastic. It was beautifully written, and everyone was very IC, as always when you write.

Sorry people are being jackasses about your fics, though. They're fools and I love your style. ^_^

*dies* Your writing has always made me melt. You have such an amazing style. I really love when it gets abstract, because it adds so much more emotions to the scene.

Hisoka's progression into accepting how he feels was carried out perfectly. When he finally wakes up from his not-so-evil dream, and they finally get together, I might have passed out for a minute or two. The build up just has you waiting like a loaded spring.

LOVED IT!

There is absolutely nothing wrong with this style; it's very witty and sophisticated, taking more effort both to read and to write it than most would bother with. It says things (very good things) about the writer ^^