Reviews for heavenly virtues

Reviews For: heavenly virtues

Post 2007-12-25 ch 7,	abuseIn a story where a young six year old boy has pink hair, you'd better damn well be looking for fairy tales. Does Shiro's long hair mean he's suddenly badass? I have a hard time picturing that. XD And apparently everyone lives long, like DBZ grandpas--lol. Such a rich family tree you have going here. You should be proud...or twitterpated. Whatever -Post
Post 2007-12-25 ch 6,	abuseThis chapter has got to be the most girlish thing you've ever wrote ever. On that note, I have a hard time getting used to a Lilith who openly pines on Ruk. She's always struck me as a Brett-esque character, harkening to the femme-lead in Hemingway's 'Sun Also Rises'. I always figured that the most Lilith would ever show her true feelings was a turn of the shoulder. But, oh well. She's always been teh smex. ZHAEL LOVES TO GO SHOPPING--SNSLKDJTKJSKTLJT
Post 2007-12-25 ch 5,	abuseHow about a gunblade?-snkt. Molok is Ruk's teacher? Who'd have thunk it. Anyways, good stuff. I'll be sure not to tear my pants over the next few days. -Post
Post 2007-12-25 ch 4,	abuseI wonder how much teh Sora puts her literary affection in these...male protagonists. Cute fledgling is cute. Though he could be gripping the shaft of the broom a little less for my tastes. My, my comments sure are useful, aren't they? -Post
Post 2007-12-25 ch 3,	abuseI see the making of a sitcom here--Liker Perfect Strangers meets Different Strokes with a gallon of blood. Baelfael/Behemos, OTP. :Moira grows up: "It's natural! It's not a choice!" :she proceeds to make out with two asian schoolgirls:
Post 2007-12-25 ch 2,	abuseI don't know what'd terrorize me more. Having to clean up the entrails and bloody remains of my slaughtered parents, or diaper duty. All things considered, I don't blame Behemos for giving into Baelfael's suggestion. Moira...the thermonuclear warhead baby. God help us all.
Post 2007-12-25 ch 1,	abuseBut when he said "as you wish", what he really meant was "strip out of them jeans and straddle my crocodile". Only into chapter one and already you're putting three times as much effort into describing the virtuous slant of these characters. But can this really be called "chastity" on Zoniha's part and not "cold water on the peach farm"? One wonders... -Post
Dantaron 2007-12-21 ch 7,	abusehay Sora. ^_^ Guess wut? YOU WIN. =D Seriously, for the result of a single concept, you did amazing things with this pair of fics. Temperance, charity, and humility were definitely my favourites this time around. ^_^ (And not just because the first two featured Baelfael). You really showed another side of Behemos in Temperance, and damn, that's brutal, having the parents killed like that. And, the Baelfael and Moira of Charity was awesome - holy shit, Moira's smart. I got lost around the third of an hour question, oy. And, good showing the origins of Baelfael being Moira's tutor, and such. Humility was really my overall favourite virtue in this fic, though, for several reasons. For one, I wasn't expecting a "future" fic, and so that was a pleasant surprise - as was the B-man's kid with Zhael, which is omgcute and kittyshipping. Really, the greatest awesome was in Bomberman and Regulus, how they had changed. Regulus isn't so much of a jerkoff anymore, and he actually seems to have matured a lot. Shiro as well is totally badass - he isn't all dorky any more, and has really resolved here into a man (I lol'd at the beverage timing thing, too) - and the confidence is good to see. Cracking a joke to Regulus' face = win. As well, the incorporation of the kshar'wa is pwnsome - I had forgotten that it would slow down the aging process. And, Bomberman growing out his hair to shoulder-length = mega-win. XD @ "You're scary", as well as Reg needing Bomberman's help. So, do you have a whole other plot idea cooked up behind the thing Reg needed help for, or was it just a spur-of-the-moment thing? Nonetheless, a very well-done fic, Sora, especially for the 'virtue' theme. =D I'll be reading (and off to review the sins!)

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