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| SqutternutBosh 2007-12-27 ch 3,  | abuseFantastic! Everyone was in-character, the dialogue was well-paced and witty, and I really liked how some of the jokes were recurring and kept linking back to each other. Plus, there was a neat little Christmas storyline to tie it all together. Great job! |
| Cohen101 2007-12-26 ch 3, | abusePretty excellent if I do say so myself. I enjoyed it a lot, and there was one line especially that I was imagining Chandler saying and it gave me the biggest smile. Too bad it's over and I can't say update soon. Oh well, Happy Holidays! |
| Lucinka 2007-12-25 ch 3, anon. | abusejust one note... realy nice one...(: |
| Venused 2007-12-21 ch 3, | abuseThat was seriously awesome. It made me laugh out loud several times, it was really sweet and totally seemed like something all the Friends would actually do. I can't find anything to nitpick, you nailed every single character, even Rachel and Phoebe, both of whom I think are quite hard to get right without being too normal or too wacky, respectively. I was a little disappointed Mondler didn't really get much of a conclusion after most of the story focused on them, but still, this was a great Friends Christmas story! I really hope we'll see more from you soon :) This is going on my favourites :) |
| mondlerlove 2007-12-21 ch 3, anon. | abuseIt's a good story, I'm a bit disappointed Mondler didn't get their presents or that we didn't get to see them discuss this. Please write more Mondler. |
| maraudernumba5 2007-12-21 ch 3, | abuseaww, very cute. i could definitely see this being an episode...ah but sadly friends is no more *tear* |
| mondlerlove 2007-12-21 ch 1, anon. | abuseThis is really good. It's in character and funny. I love Mondler stories, keep up the good work, can't wait to see what they get each other. |