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Adala
2008-07-17
ch 1,
abuseThis story was fun! L came across a little mean, though. I wonder, what he would have done or said if his plan had worked out and he'd gotten all the presents.
The idea with the charcoal was amazing. Your Light was surprisingly nice - he acted, I think, as if L really was his friend - at least I would play such a trick only on a friend :-p

I at first didn't get the "will you be around on New Year's?" because where I come from, kissing is not involved. But in America, you kiss at midnight, right? I've seen it on "Friends" ;-)

Oh, and just one little detail: in Britain there exists a christmas cake - and I found out that they also have that in Japan where it is "a sponge cake, frosted with whipped cream, often decorated with strawberries" - hint, hint ;-)
http://en./wiki/Christmas_cake

Anyway, I had fun with the story despite of it being July right now.

Cheers!
Adala
Shadowsole
2008-06-30
ch 1,
abuseI don't know if you've been told or found out already but Light is handcuffed for about a year, Starting about October so the do share a Christmas together but that's later.

Anyway like all your other stories this is great!
CloakedSchemer06
2008-06-24
ch 1,
abuse^^

This is really funny! I laughed so hard!
Light's reactions are pricless and L's childish behavior is priceless!
Ricoch3t
2008-06-22
ch 1,
abuseLmao!! Omg- this is priceless! I love it to bits.
lauraluvsedward
2008-06-21
ch 1,
abusehahaha. this so great and adorable. there should definitely be more.
TheCityTurnsOrange
2008-05-31
ch 1,
abuseThis is probably the most well-written LxLight that I've seen since wild-filly's stories! And, ahh, the crack-iness! I especially love your summary though. This was really in character too.

In short, just all-around perfect in every way!
daydream14
2008-04-30
ch 1,
abuseWow, L just wanted those presents didn't he? Light is so paranoid... immagining that mistltoe would kill him...
-w- easy enough
2008-04-23
ch 1,
abuse^^ that was funny. ...I actually don't have any idea what you do at new years though... but I think I can guess. ^^
the sadistic homicidal chil...
2008-04-19
ch 1,
abuseXD Oh yes, this was absolutely delightful. Hahaha, L. You got coal for Christmas. XD You've been bad~! Heeheeheeheehee. Oh this was too cute. Especially the snogging at the end-that was the gumdrop button on the gingerbread man. :P Haha, this was so awesome. XD
Lina Metallium
2008-03-18
ch 1,
abuseI think I love you a little. D: Holy shit, that was beautiful.
Yami-no-Hikari-7
2008-03-04
ch 1,
abuseYay! ^_^ I loved it! It's so hard to find a good Uke!Light Seme!L story. Gr8 job.
Fedia
2008-03-01
ch 1,
abuseI read this one some time ago and just reread it recently. It's very well done humour: tasty and smart.
jbird
2008-02-11
ch 1, anon.
abuseNot just crack, but fun, creative, intelligent, well-written crack? [fangirls] Will you marry me?
T-c3
2008-01-20
ch 1,
abuseAhaha! That was awesome. (But, darn, I really should've read it around Christmas time. Oh, well.) I had to laugh when Raito was trying to figure out what the mysterious plant above the door was. "Christmas voodoo"... That's just priceless. Once again, you have amazed me with your writing prowess. ^_^
BlakValentyne-U69
2008-01-19
ch 1,
abuseThis is so... comfy =D
Good for the soul.

L AS THE GRINCH?! =O
How cruel of Light to acuse him of such!
Ryuuzaki is much too innocent, cute and sweet toothed to be the grinch!

And '"Yagami-kun has no respect for commercialized Western holidays," L said, but he actually sounded angry.'
When Light tossed him a coal, I kinda got scared. Haha, I went "Oh s*, you are in TROUBLE!"
And the way you described L in that scene reminded me of BB, thus making the story more realistic and intense.

Oh, and their kiss. LMAO!

Loved this!
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