I love this story! It's just so funny and I hope I'll be able to read the next chapter someday and see what Raito's "revelation" is. ;D

~T^T~
Ryuuzaki...!!
*cries*
*glares at Misa*
I never know whether to like you or not!
*looks at Raito*
You...I love you but you can be so...So...DENSE. @^@
And Ryuuzaki!! I love you so much..!! I believe in you and your ability to get Raito! >;D
*grins insanely*
This idea is really amazing! I like how you're weaving everything togetehr and where you're placing people/thigs! ;P
I can't wait for mroe! You're story is brilliant! >XD

-A very happy to be reading the story,
--CDA

Heh! This story's hilarious and drama-ish at the same time, which is great, I believe. *snort* The "eye gag". LOVED that part with a passion! I don't really have any critic-critiques or anything.

You have so many fans it's ridiculous! XD But your writing shows that you clearly deserve it. I wonder if you have any actual novels in the works or something. I'd read 'em! :)

But, yeah, you must have an actual life by now so it's understandable if there aren't any updates any time soon. I'll just let my imagination go further until I grow out of it (I hope that's not for a while). But updates will be always welcome to us fans of ya! ^_^

please, you can't leave 3 stories unfinished, right ? please please please, this is driving me crazy ! ^_^
At least tell us you're alright, we're getting worried here :\

I love this so much. Your very talented.

This fanfic is wonderfully written, and I love how you made Ryuuk an apple-eating dog. I'll be waiting for the next chapter. *stares at page for 5 minutes* I'm just going to do something else while I wait.

Interesting idea, the boys being friends since childhood. Nice to see their relationship. It'd be interesting to see the choice Ryuuzaki makes.
I hope you'll continue this.

woah! rocking plot!...PLEASE update this story...cause its just ah-mazing like that ;) Thanx =]

~Rose~

sigh, i miss your writing. i hope you havent died. that would be upsetting. you and your talents are too good to lose.

lol that was exceedingly good. the competition between them is just as good when i doesnt involve potential death and is more accessible to the public. that is to say, freaking excellent and entertaining. i was grinning for the whole chapter.

This is great so far. It's a pity you haven't updated in over a year, though I'm sure you've gotten many reviews on that matter already so I'll skip the mundane frivolities.

Your characterizations are all spot on despite the AU setting and for some reason, I really like the fact that Sayu has a crush on Ryuuzaki. Also like how Ryuuzaki is so torn between becoming 'L' or staying with his best friend.

The writing is very clean and I don't think I spotted any errors. I really like your style. I think I just really like this setting, too.

In any case, good luck with your writing!

Please pweese!! COntinue, i really like thsi fanfiction, and evertime i see it not finished my heart renchs. I think it may tear in half. I know you must be a great writer, so please ! use ur talent to keep me from a heart aching death
~DEON

Are you going to continue that fic!! Because it was really good!! I really like when it is UA, because if not, then the fic are really dramatic and somethimes a little laugh dont hurt nobody. Anyway just to know, is L or Ryuzaki the uke? Because I adore when that guy is the uke!! he is so adorable lol!

this is great! an intriguing AU, in a fandom where there seem to be remarkably few AUs of this variety... Anyhow, I really am hoping you will be continuing this-- the dynamic between Raito and Ryuuzaki is really interesting, and your a/n at the end really sets me up for a good chapter.

Even though it's been a year, I'm looking forward to any updates you might make to this!

Happy December.

I love it! Your plot is definitely one of the more well-developed and unique ones that I've seen, and I can't wait to read more. Good work!