My only real issue with this is that it is "half-translated" and quite a bit inaccurate in the Elf (Erl) King's description. The title of the peom translated to englis would be Elf King, not Erl King. Also, in the poem, as the child is dying he sees a beautiful elf who entices the child to join him in his land. I have never heard of the grotesque, death-like figure you portrayed. Anyways, enough of my rant, it's just that I took extensive German and this was a poem we analyzed the crap out of. I actually do like the premise of your story!
xoxo,
Candi

a wonderfull captivating story that I seem to have fallen in love with

"'Anne, who was only twelve, was left beside the girl being raped. The Huntsman, who dragged her there, sat on her legs and smirked lewdly at Miss Williamson, before tearing the clothes off of the child. As he made the little girl scream, his companion set the Dark Faerie on Miss Williamson. She cried and begged as the Faerie began to bite her and rub against her, their clothing tearing her skin and drawing blood'"


okey that was to much ...
they maybe know what was hapening whit the harry but the childrens not have the fault , and that is not excuse for rape childrens i like your history so far exep that you ned help if you think that is normal.

Wow.. what a great ending!

Thank you. It was a bizzare, but fascinating ride.

some parts were a little gory . . . but i loved the story. it was amazingly well written. the depth of character analysis truly made this story wonderful. yet again i move on to read more of your stories

What an interesting and different story... I just read the thing and it's great!!

I love the character 'ErlKing' He's great..

I just don't understand how the Huntsman could feel when they're dead..I mean, they're raping and stuff..So, doesn't that mean that the ErlKing could also feel...

Other then the above, Great Work.!!

Cheers,

Love it! Holy **-god I love it! -skips back to read it again-

o must say that i was a but wary of this pairing at first, but you write it very well, I absolutely loved it!! you are an amazing writer!!

I've honestly been putting off rewading this story, but i must say that i really like it so far. and the summery that you put up at the bottom for your possible new fic, sounds very intriguing. I can't wait for you to write it so that i can read it!!

Lol. I wanted to comment on your A/N. I went through the same thing - couldn't make myself revise at all. It just wasn't interesting, no matter that doom was nearing with every second. I just kept watching films and reading fiction. XD

I'm quite enjoying the story; Harry's and Voldemort's interaction amuses me greatly. :P

I was wondering if Harry would become the new Erlking, nothing lasts forever after all.

I liked it.

awe... i cried

um...ok, did we change authors in the middle of the story? We went from wonderful innocent(ish) Harry to nasty gory Harry. Yuck, I'm not reading anymore.

One of the best LVHP fanfiction ever written ^^ their interaction is so beautiful and I never expected Harry will be the next Erlking.

All of those years striving for immortality, and it turns out that love was all it took to send Lord Voldemort to the afterlife.

The last paragraph took me so powerfully, and yeah what a great pity Dumbledore wasn't there to see it while sucking on his lemon drop. Pretty sure he'd choke on it xD

~M