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Tatyana
2008-08-07
ch 30, anon.
abuseaw! That was such a cute ending! The story was really great to! Oh my did u make a sequel? if not you definitley should! Aw, so cute!
DracoMalfoy'sChick
2008-08-04
ch 30,
abuseThat was so good.Great job!
Alexis Joneson
2008-08-02
ch 30,
abuseLol, i just realized, i spent two hours reading this! oh wait, it's almost 1 AM, so almost three! this was definetly worth reading. I am actually exceedingly impressed with how well you carried their characters so well! the chapters were not too long and not too short, just perfect! although, now i think i'm going to make my chapters a bit shorter...13-15 pages and all... but anyway, very good job, this is definetly going in my faves!
Stella9876
2008-07-30
ch 30,
abuseAw! Lovely! very emotional!
Puking Pastilles
2008-07-30
ch 30,
abuse~sigh~ true. but the HAPPY ENDING is all that matters
Ember Riddle
2008-07-30
ch 30,
abuseI liked the happy ending! (although is kinda sad anout what happened to Hermione)
Stella9876
2008-07-29
ch 1,
abuseYey! My birthday is in May First! well, at that time I was 7 years old!! lol! ok, ill start tor ead it!!
Drew Fuller's Lover
2008-07-29
ch 30,
abusei really liked this story and have followed it from the begining. there was only one thing i was really disapointed about. the name narcissa. i just dont think that it fits the story and almost ruined for me. just thought i would let you know.
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 9,
abuseAw
That was a well good chapter ;D
I'l read the rest of the story tomoro

xx
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 8,
abuseAw
Their going on a date (:
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 7,
abuseAww poor Hermione :(
Draco's only trying to help her :(

Great chapter
(:
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 6,
abuseI really glad they got put together
I feel well sorry for Hermione
But I wish she could realise Draco isnt his father!
Good chapter
(:
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 5,
abuseIm looking forward see where this story is going
(:
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 4,
abuseAww
Their calling each other Hermione and Draco
;D
The.One.And.Onlii.Bethii
2008-07-29
ch 3,
abuseOoer
Dracos s snstryi o be cvil
And hes just being stubborn :P
Another good chapter (:
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